knocz
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Posted : Mar 21, 2014 21:07
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Hi B!
Thanks for this tune  Sounding good, nice to decompress.
Tips:
- @2:42 I think a new bassline would drop in here nicely  Or instead, take the previous bassline and move the B note and lower it a semitone, so it's at the same as the root note. Like this the track would start off with a mono-tonic single tone, then evolve to have that up-note
- @4:11 Nice bass again, but I think the the two or 3 top notes are too high up the scale and loose their power. If you lower them one octave, they will have much more feel to them
- @+-5:10 A nice lead in the front would be great here too, thinking about flutes, or a LFO on an oscillator pitch, with delay, or even more of that intro vocal!; tons of stuff to do and go!
Nevertheless this is sounding good man keep it up
  Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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