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Mad enT new track ( last for the moment ) - Dish Washnesh ( psytrance )
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Vermeee
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Posted : May 28, 2011 05:36:36
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Full Maya
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Posted : May 30, 2011 16:05
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woot!!! Best Track Ever!!!
Dont Stop producing and keep progressing my friend! =)
  "Many people would like to destroy the thorn and save the flower, but that is not possible. They are part of each other, and both must keep strong to survive."
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Vermeee
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Posted : Jun 6, 2011 01:05
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thanks dude 
its my favourite track from me indeed for now..
critiques on this one would be nice so next can be better..
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Ket Sci
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Posted : Jun 6, 2011 09:56
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hey nice track )
nicely built although i think a break in the middle somewhere wouldn't be bad ... but very psy and powerfull ... cool
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Posted : Jun 7, 2011 22:24
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aciduss
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Posted : Jun 9, 2011 00:18
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Hi! Well.. i listened to this and sincerely aside from the intro I didn't like it because I believe it repeats same sounds over and over which are not even interesting in the first place.
Please don't take this as an offence at all.
But... man... look you use a lot of high pitched sounds which tire the ear very quiclky. You need to work on synth assambles that include low registry sounds, more meat you know... also some crunchy elements and big stabs you know, ambiences and stuff.
I needed much more sound variety and story to enjoy... your track could highly benefit from more elements that talk to each other, synths that do the question - answer thing.
If you are going to use melodies make sure you learn some of theory to compose strong ideas and support them by using different instruments harmonically.
Also, your percussion is a little rigid. You need to carefully tweak percussion lines... i hear mostly hihats that require phine velocity control and maybe some more elements: hihats, shakers, congas, tablas, glitchy noises...
Mix and EQ can get a lot better.
I will listen to some of your other tracks to learn more what you are into but from now I can begin to tell you your sound is childish and needs to sound more aggressive and less funny, depending of course on what you really want to do.
You seem to have nice ideas, like the samples and some trippy noises i like here and there... you just need to build a better base and stronger more solid mix, work more on detail and avoid preset use.
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Posted : Jun 9, 2011 02:22
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