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Vermeee
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Posted : Oct 2, 2011 05:50:30
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 13:33
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  "Many people would like to destroy the thorn and save the flower, but that is not possible. They are part of each other, and both must keep strong to survive."
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faxinadu
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 13:42
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bass is a bit too fat. on good speakers it will sound good no problem, but try it in a car or laptop speakers you will be disappointed. the over-power in the lows also makes for a feeling of lack of power in the mids and highs, they sound too far away in the mix.
once you fix the bass, the rest will be much more up-front.
there was a track of mine that had a very similar kick/bass sound, and it is a shame because it kills the mix.
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Vermeee
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 14:39
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wow thanks brother... i was plannin on changin the kick but i guess i gotta also fix the bass..which one in specific u think its too fat? there are 2 bass..one in the second octave most present in the first half of the track and another in the first octave... most present in the second half of the track ..or both are too fat?
bout the creation process of the track...the melodies... sounds drums etc.. did u enjoy it ? or not the style ?
thanks for the feedback 
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faxinadu
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 14:43
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first one
all the rest yes i think is very nice, that is why i commented about the bass, once that is under control, i think the rest will be much more forward.
it is energy in the sub bass. try rolling 20-40hz somewhere around there is the problem i think.
after you do it, you will suddenly have much more headroom too, the track will be able to be much louder!
second one has less of that problem.
of course also the kick, you noticed it yourself. again, this is just a matter of subtle eq to take some power from the very very low end. don't worry it will still sound fat.
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faxinadu
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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 14:48
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i will look for that tune of mine that was the same and upload and share with you, exact same problem there.
its ok if i share them here? i don't want to pollute your thread. i can give you in private, no problem
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Vermeee
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Hey ..
Very creative !
Dont think bass is to/So fat as faxinadu have already said , I think this is more about more eq + Make the bass abit more short (By now imo they are both to close to eachother) So (When open it .. Abit) Will get more air inside (Beetween the bass kik) Then .. You will get a bonus Vermeee (And sure you know what i mean) - Will be kind of more 'Press' And 'Push' . Theres places in (Imo) i found wrong/'UnFit' bass note (Not wrong with the sound .. No , this is not what i mean , Wrong with the all picture - When all are integrated together) , But at the same time coluld hear 1-2 parts with an greats ones . I like your 'High' sound work and i can see the quality of the work in there . Bring more atmos in to complete the all story ..
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faxinadu
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Posted : Oct 5, 2011 14:39
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i can't find the file  if i find it i will send you
best thing to do to check if it is/isn't too powering, is burn it like it is now to a cd and take it to some shit boxex - car, laptop, etc. see how it sounds and then decide how you need to approach it.
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