Freeflow
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Posted : Mar 14, 2006 19:51
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Hello daniel!
the track could be loud and clear with some mastering...
you could add a melody with more flow underneath the breakbeat kind of melody, it feels a little stuttering, i miss some melodic flow..
i think you have to work more to get this track to flow and feel interesting... i can hear its a progressive tune..
work on counter melodies and maybe the melody dont fit so well with the kick&bass&perc foundation, maybe if the melody had a longer release so it melted together more, or overlap the notes and have it in legato...
a good example where the melody is just enough is at 04:25, small parts, fits with the progressive touch... but before that the melody is to wide, too much jumps in tones, try and break it down... slow it down
the end is nice...from 04:25 and forward it feels like its the right feeling for the track. slow and working it self up..
just some ideas... good luck
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