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Loud & Clear (Mastered)
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daniel duarte
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 25, 2006 06:07
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Freeflow
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Mar 29, 2006 21:42
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i like it, its cool..
though the mainlead could use some filter modulation to get it more exciting, or some other kind of modulation, it could even morph into some other lead..
some rhytmic pads underneath maybe..., try a gate on the pads you have, and maybe listen how they sound a octave lower..
i think you can fit more ideas in this track..
but i like the groove...
i think its clipping at some part...
other than that good job...
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Mar 30, 2006 02:08
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I think the first long stop doesnt come in the right time, you need to come to a climax before you make a long stop. Try doing some cutoff and resonanse automations, it adds to the synths a lot!
4:54, it takes us to the beggining, you can try doing something else here, to connect it to the next track steps
good work overall
i would add more fx as well
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daniel duarte
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 30, 2006 18:54
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Hello. Thank you both for your comments. I will take your sugestions in mind:
- explore morphing leads, rythmic pads, gates
- playing more with cutoff and resonance automations.
To New Era: its not really clip cause of excessive dB, but because the gates I did in the some parts of the vocals.. The reverb also accentuates that :S
Since New Era already checked my other demo, I leave the invitation to Sound Surgeon: http://forum.isratrance.com/viewtopic.php/topic/84728/forum/26/start/0
I think its better than this one and I corrected some aspects. |
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