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Local Lunatic few new progressive tracks!
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grinya
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Posted : Feb 1, 2012 10:01:06
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ierofante
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Posted : Feb 2, 2012 11:08
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Overall, the track is slow and boring for my taste. The melody patterns repeat too often giving a feeling of boredom.
You have to obtain more evolution for your melody parts.
Also, try to do something different than simply play the melody with a synth, and then switching to another one.
The delayed synths in the last part are unpleasant to the ear, also because of lacking of modulation, and sometimes the acid stabs seem out of place in my opinion.
The bass sound is decent, but is not so present in the mix. Try to mix it better along other instruments.
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ierofante
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Posted : Feb 2, 2012 11:57
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[I listened to the third one]
Fire Walk With Me |
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grinya
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Posted : Feb 2, 2012 19:50
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ierofante
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 15:33
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If you don't understand something, feel free to pm me.
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