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akuma
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Posted : Jun 4, 2007 18:11
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Tomos
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Posted : Jun 4, 2007 18:39
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It's a bit.. random.
Everyone has different tastes, but for me this is too fast, has no melodic parts just seemingly random notes and patterns, can't hear the bassline, there is no flow between sections. Kick needs some more low end too.
I think the mix levels aren't bad and the vocal effect and some of the sounds are good though. |
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captain-kirk
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Posted : Jun 4, 2007 18:51
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Inner Demon
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Posted : Jun 4, 2007 23:01
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Quite original, and some pretty nice stuff.
IMO there's two things lacking, first of all you need to create a synergy between the bass and the kick. The kick is mixed very loud and the bass is hardly heard at all so I can't even tell if they go well together.
Secondly there needs to be a bit more 'flow'.. good kick and bass combo will help with this but also try and maybe put a pad or something in there that goes on for more than just a few seconds.
Good luck! |
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akuma
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Posted : Jun 8, 2007 10:33
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thanks inner demon i will try... but i made this on a friends computer with somekind of fake 5.1 soundboxes [imagine they doesn't need 5.1 sound card] and the bass was hearding a lot
so when i send the project home i was dissapointed thanks again for the comment's. |
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