So yesterday i had to make a track for a schools assignment, (just replaced audio file on Soundcloud)
the vocals failed to download so i could not answer the assignment in time
But hey! i have come pretty far now. It feels like the time is right for feedback!
You're a happy kinda guy i'm on crappy speakers but kick and bass sound good, don't really like the stab, is it a major chord? seems too commercial, but thats my personal taste a few more percussion elements would be nice also feels a bit empty the track
But its a cool track
Oni Katsu
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Posted : May 22, 2012 13:57
So yesterday i had to make a track for a schools assignment, (just replaced audio file on Soundcloud)
the vocals failed to download so i could not answer the assignment in time
But hey! i have come pretty far now. It feels like the time is right for feedback!
You're a happy kinda guy i'm on crappy speakers but kick and bass sound good, don't really like the stab, is it a major chord? seems too commercial, but thats my personal taste a few more percussion elements would be nice also feels a bit empty the track
But its a cool track
Hahaha i kind of agree about the stab yeah, i'm not sure what chord it is actually, i just found something funky to stab with. I'm gonna make the sound itself sound more like a choir though, that will make it less "mainstream"
And yeah, i can add some more interesting percussive sounds and evolve the percussion a bit more, i fully agree, thanks!
Equilizyme
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Posted : May 24, 2012 03:08
I agree about the stab, yeah some more percs would really improve the beginning of the track. the glitched vocal bit is pretty cool, you could add some stereo delay to them and then put an effect on the delays, that would make this more psychedelic i think, and i think the track could use more psychedelic more going on and more complexity will take it to the next level. KB sounds awesome --
http://soundcloud.com/equilizyme --
Oni Katsu
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Posted : May 30, 2012 00:31
The link is now updated!
I changed the stab, and lowered the BPM to 135
Added a double-layered Open-Hat and introduce the Psy-303 already in the beginning by adding it to the 303stab.
Echo and a little more sloppy reverb to the chopped-Vocal, Feel free to suggest fun filters to add! I don't know about a lot of fun things to do with vocals.
Also; WHY!!! Does Soundcloud make disgusting distort sounds of my uploads when i upload them at high volume?
i'm on crappy speakers but kick and bass sound good, don't really like the stab, is it a major chord? seems too commercial, but thats my personal taste 
a few more percussion elements would be nice also feels a bit empty the track
