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UIU
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 13, 2004 22:23
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All I have to say about this song is when I finished with it my laptop got down to it's knees and was begging for mercy and asking back for it's lost CPyoUth! I can't really describe it. I started trying to make minimal, but I ended up with maximal. It's a blend of different psystyles. I hope you will like it.
It's called Astral Symphony.
Here's the link. Right click on it and choose save target as.
http://www.soundclick.com/util/DownloadSong.cfm?ID=847621
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/uiumusic.htm for all my songs |
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CLAW
CLAW
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Posted : Jan 13, 2004 22:49
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synaex
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Posted : Jan 14, 2004 02:46
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Ok, first: sorry! but i like to give (and receive) constructing critics, i mean, u can't get anywhere with revieuws like 'good track, i love it' , 'nice tune' etc...
So here's what i think: (no offence!)
But, it sounds a little like a thousand similar tracks, ok, it's hard to make something new in the style you are working, cause the world is getting overwhelmed with it,(powertrance, just to put a stupid tag on it, don't like tagging, but it helps with explaining what i mean) there is some pretty good stuff comin' out, but there's also a whole lot of copycatting (is that a real word), anyway, u've got the hang of it, (with the typical bassline, the breaks, the sounds), now try to bring your own new elements in it, your ideas are good but add some more of yerself init, and don't try to sound like all the others, also, one other thingie, a little more variation in percussion, hats, may be welcome. But keep on tryin', one bad critic won't kill u, it can only add new views to your music.
grtz! |
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UIU
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 14, 2004 05:48
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Can you tell me which sounds you find overused? Maybe I can change them. I'll see first if others agree with you. But I am not changing the bassline and the formant sound lead at the end, although I know they have been overused. Probably you are aslo talking about the sound that comes after the drums from the first part of the song stop(the one that goes from left to right). It is made with the nord lead and the problem is that almost every sound you could think of has already been made, cause everyone has got one. I agree it has been overused but you must agree that it goes well with that part of the song. I wasn't trying to copy it, I was just turning the knobs, and when I heared it it sounded the right sound for the part. |
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Anak
Anakoluth
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Posted : Jan 14, 2004 12:11
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its not my cup of psychedelic tea, but you got some elements in there that i really like, for example that thing entering in the break at around 2.20..altho it clips here and there..or is it me?
for the rest...as i said..not my cup of bassline, and i think you need more mid, much more, it'll make it sound fuller, more blasting, coz it sounds pretty empty as it is now.
i would also try to play the synths at an equal volume...
cheers and keep up, i'm pretty sure fullonists will enjoy this one. peace
ps: i like your name. when will the book be finish ? 
 Anakoluth A Pebble in Your Eardrum's Shoe since 2001!
http://www.myspace.com/anakoluth
http://www.ektoplazm.com/profiles/anakoluth/
http://cronomi.com |
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