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thecrimsonchin
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Posted : Jan 5, 2013 18:52:29
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smoker
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Posted : Jan 5, 2013 19:47
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you got a lot cool stuff going there (Brazil style)
your bassline sound not good
try to put on bassline little reeverb and renaissance wave
to make baseline more buzz
keep practical and will done
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supergroover
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Posted : Jan 6, 2013 14:31
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I think the bass is pretty decent. the kick is a bit weak i think. It could use some more punch (lowmid).
the percussion doesnt really flow that well with the kick/bass in my opinion. It is a bit too breakbeat. Maybe lower the volume of some hits a bit so it gets a more driving character. Or delete a few hits.
Next you need to work on the arrangement. Make sure the track is going somewhere. Why not copy the arrangement of a track you really like and see how they handle their sounds/ structure.
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thecrimsonchin
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Posted : Jan 6, 2013 20:25
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THanks for the comments:) they will help me focus. will post new version soon. |
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