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Learning New Tricks :) i made a new choon, 139 bpms this time, would you lend me your ears???
Anyer
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Posted : May 5, 2014 10:41:51
so here it is!!!
took me a bit and i would really luv your always honest Opinions and suggestions...this time i dunn find too much to complain...the question here is... bass is too loud??? kick??? does it suck????
thank you for your time israbro's, i've been reading old threads here learning a lot so i'll soon comment your music (when i achieve more technical skills so i can give u a cool opinion too!!!) good vibes from das Mexico!!!
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Posted : May 5, 2014 13:42
sound really cool bro and what vst your using for your'e baseline?
are you windows or mac user?
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Anyer
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Posted : May 5, 2014 14:28
basefree
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Posted : May 5, 2014 17:17
Beautiful track man. Well done! There's a lot of really good ideas in there--especially with the percussion. The only thing that I think could be improved would be the bassline. I don't know why but for some reason I feel that it doesn't really suit the vibe of the total track that well. It does in some ways (because it's a little airy) but I think you could do something to make it vibe a little better. I can't quite describe it very well but I feel like the bassline is kind of off on it's own a little bit and could be a little more cohesive. I'll keep listening though and see if I can come up with anything a bit more specific.
All in all, I love this track . Good job.
*EDIT*
Like the sound that comes in around 1:51. That synth, and what you build off of it later in the track, is what I'm getting at. I think that if you made the bassline ever so slightly grungier and with a little more bounce it might compliment that synth in particular a bit better.
What do you think?
klippel
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Posted : May 5, 2014 20:40
hey dude,
liked the first trak you posted some time ago but somehow did not come to comment. will do this time.
your kick/bass is sweet, oldschool in a good way. you do have that vibe and percussion form early 2000 scando prog, also that twisted sample in and out thingy is really cool.. just a long cinematic yourney with the offbeat that carrys you along.
lots of good ideas in it as well. a lot of synth levels are too loud for my taste and the mix could use some coherence level wise all together, but the music is really cool keep groovin!
what did you do the sounds to have that drastic autopan ? sometimes my heads feels like going from one to the other side cos the sounds fly around?
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
Anyer
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Posted : May 6, 2014 03:36
yo guys thanks for your very amazing feedback! well now i worked out more elements in choon, also fixed the mix so the pads shouldn't be so loud now, and a New fat ass Kick that i wish will make basslline more appealing!!!
for the autopan i use a thingy called rotator in bitwig, a bit usefull
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Posted : May 6, 2014 18:44
hey man nice! u have good sense of building and releasing the tension... yea cool rythm and perc ideas.. nice pads at 8.36 around.. frm 6.05 on i would maybe pack more in and end it bit earlier.. cool man.. keep at it!
re-arrange what you thought was real
Anyer
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Posted : May 9, 2014 22:26
Bass and kick fixed, i wasn't aware of all those lost frequency's fuckin up my mix!!!
im a PC user why?
