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Le Saboteur - HardGroovin
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Dopamin
Dopamin
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 20:46
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Hey ppl i need your help?
I need your feedback about this track, do you think it sux or would you acctually consider this to be a OK or good track?
Need you opinion about this casue im stuck as it is right now...
Gimme your feedback as honest as possible..
ThanX in advance!
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Le S4B0T3UR - Ground Effect (UNRELEASED)
Le S4B0T3UR - HooverKraft (V/A Night Vision compiled by Oscuro)
Le S4B0T3UR - Coroded (UNRELEASED)
Le S4B0T3UR - SumoRider (UNRELEASED)
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ND
ProSect
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 21:49
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Hey mate!
I really loved it, definetly its more then OK... Hard rhythm, metallic percussion section, electro disco but fused using much more massive covnerting machine, keep the good work.
One thing you can do is fill out more the second part of the song.
Cheers
ND
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Moonsun
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 23:33
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I heard it and i think u do realy nice work...all the best my friend |
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Dopamin
Dopamin
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 23:33
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thanx you guys.
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Le S4B0T3UR - Ground Effect (UNRELEASED)
Le S4B0T3UR - HooverKraft (V/A Night Vision compiled by Oscuro)
Le S4B0T3UR - Coroded (UNRELEASED)
Le S4B0T3UR - SumoRider (UNRELEASED)
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Nathan
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 23:51
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The start is electrifying - I love this part. Its very good 
But imho you have a weak link:
2:31 the melody is exaggerated and unpleasant.
3:24 sorry but I really don't like the drums here- they remind me a pop song from the far past something like.."I need a hero..."
4:13-the good mood is back again - this is gr8!
Somehow this track remands me Ticon style!
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Dopamin
Dopamin
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 23:57
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On 2006-02-05 23:51, Nathan wrote:
The start is electrifying - I love this part. Its very good
But imho you have a weak link:
2:31 the melody is exaggerated and unpleasant.
3:24 sorry but I really don't like the drums here- they remind me a pop song from the far past something like.."I need a hero..."
4:13-the good mood is back again - this is gr8!
Somehow this track remands me Ticon style!
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Thanx man great input...
Well the drums i like (3:24) but it's a bit oldschool....
What is unpleasent with the melody that comes in at 2:31? to high or to boring please tell me more...
Thanx again for the great input...
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Le S4B0T3UR - Ground Effect (UNRELEASED)
Le S4B0T3UR - HooverKraft (V/A Night Vision compiled by Oscuro)
Le S4B0T3UR - Coroded (UNRELEASED)
Le S4B0T3UR - SumoRider (UNRELEASED)
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Nathan
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Posted : Feb 6, 2006 00:08
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No problemo 
About the melody - I just don't like the Notes. It's unpleasant to hear it, like I said. But it's just my taste.
ye and 2 high is the right word here.
Good luck!
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gothica
Gothica
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Posted : Feb 6, 2006 17:57
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hey man! everythings cool but the toms from 2:59 and the melody is not so much may be its just a matter of taste but its my opinion man! but every thing else is nice man! |
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Dopamin
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Posted : Feb 6, 2006 23:18
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Nathan
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Posted : Feb 6, 2006 23:53
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That is a lot better version I love every second of it!
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Dopamin
Dopamin
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Posted : Feb 7, 2006 00:20
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On 2006-02-06 23:53, Nathan wrote:
That is a lot better version I love every second of it!
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Great, im glad you like or did you just write it to get me of your back...
Im kidding, im glad you liked and thank you for the feedback...
Thanx!
For the TT beliver: www.techtrance.2tunes.com
Le S4B0T3UR - Ground Effect (UNRELEASED)
Le S4B0T3UR - HooverKraft (V/A Night Vision compiled by Oscuro)
Le S4B0T3UR - Coroded (UNRELEASED)
Le S4B0T3UR - SumoRider (UNRELEASED)
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gothica
Gothica
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Posted : Feb 7, 2006 00:47
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damn man!
thats much better 4 sure! |
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Nathan
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Posted : Feb 7, 2006 01:44
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Great, im glad you like or did you just write it to get me of your back...
Im kidding, im glad you liked and thank you for the feedback...
Thanx!
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Your welcome!
I think that your track on Electroscopic compilation is gr8 so that was the reason that I cared to give my opinion here.
-=The Meaning Of Life Is To Give Life A Meaning= |
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moriya
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Posted : Feb 7, 2006 03:49
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just lovely..for my taste! pure electro
thank´s to share it!! |
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orange
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Posted : Feb 7, 2006 11:23
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