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Later oscillator 147bpm
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L66
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 16:35:22
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snowdogg
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 17:01
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yo
sounds nice!
could use another lead/more fx
maby more volume for the bass?
and less for the hats |
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L66
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 17:07
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hey man, yep will definately boost the bass and re-eq my highs. i wasnt sure i havent tested on different set of speakers yet. thanks for the feedback |
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Zero-Blade
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 19:27
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i would suggest a little cleaner dist on the pad and a little more work on the high lead in the first 1/4 of the track, it's kinda high. also the hats sound a little too rough to me. and yeah, the bass needs more powah!  overall good track!
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L66
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 19:44
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thanks for commenting zero blade, yep fixed bass, hats had a little dist on them turned em down a bit and will fix the leads at start tommorrow - ill upload then. cheers |
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 05:38
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Hello, this is what I think:
1)Intro pad is a bit anoying.
2)Beat entrance is good!
3)Nice change @2:01
4)Transition @2:50 could be better.
5)Very nice and creative break!
6)Crash is low volume.
7)Kick gets too loud in the lift @5:23, try some filter or automation.
8)@5:33 I dont like the entrance, it needs more power.
9)The bass distortion @6:57 is weird, maybe its too loud imo.
I hope this helps! Keep it up! 
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L66
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 08:01
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Wow thanks DMT, thats really detailed report, very much appreciated, i can learn alot from this!
thanks to you guys for the very helpfull tips and comments, as soon as i get home i will change some of the things you mentioned, very helpfull advice guys thanks again.
ill upload here when done, ill keep u posted cheers. |
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L66
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 15:35
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Hey i made an effort to change most of the things mentioned here have another listen tell me if it's an improvement. unfortunately i left the pad as it was with some slight eqing and volume adjustment done to it ,hope it's better and thank you all for your helpful feedback.
cheers. |
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 20:25
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There are some nice elements in here for sure, but i think the main lead sound is in for to much time. Should change it, it gets pretty repetive.
and at 1:30 something, when the sound communicating and after, the lower sound sounds abit too dry imo, could use some effects on it mayby, some nice delay or something.
Keep fighting!
cheers and good luck!
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L66
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Posted : Nov 12, 2010 00:24
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Hey thanks Wizack ill try those changes and upload here later tonight, appreciate the tips, thanks.
cheers. |
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