roakanan
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Posted : Sep 22, 2013 13:49
thanks smoker glad you enjoyed .
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roakanan
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Posted : Sep 27, 2013 12:37
almost 40 listen not many comments .....if you guys didn t like the remix or found it uninteresting i d be really interested of knowing why .....what you dislike .
cheers
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supergroover
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Posted : Sep 27, 2013 15:05
Intro is good.
Some small comments though:
Kick is a bit weak. Same goes for the bass. Does it have a reverb on it?
Panned hihats are nice. A bit hectic though and they don't work well together with the offbeat hihat. Change that last one i'd say. Also the snare is a bit weak and needs some fatness in the mids or lowmids. Might be worth trying to layer it with a fat meaty snare of which you only use the meat and not the highmids and highs.
The structure is pretty good, but the individual samples and sounds need some improving to improve the whole song!
Hope that was helpful Goodluck!
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the five assed monkey
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Posted : Sep 27, 2013 15:56
nice track man. just one comment: the mix is a little bit muddy to my ears it need some "air" and sense of space if u know what i mean..
roakanan
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Posted : Sep 27, 2013 17:58
thanks guys for taking the time .
glad to read some like the track ,it s motivating me to fine finsh it .
gonna work that out tonight when i get in the studio .
thanks super groover for the precise spoting ....no reverb on my bass and kick .....never done that tho ...do you advise me to do so ? or did u think i had used one .Your post is very helpfull.
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supergroover
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Posted : Sep 28, 2013 16:33
You are welcome =)
It kinda sounds like there is a reverb on your bass. Bass doesnt need it, it usually makes things only muddy.
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klippel
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Posted : Oct 1, 2013 15:48
some comments:
music wise its a good job, you spent much time on the story, and it keeps you interested throughout!
ditch the triplet bass part in the end, it honestly sucks and the track would be much better without it. to be fair, i do not like triplets, but if you want to use them, make them flow nicely, like ace ventura can do. this kick&bass combo here does not do that nicely.
the bass is totally muddy, whatever happened, its sounds like an effect on it, weird verb or oder modulation. maybe its distorted or eq´d to death? could and should be way clearer.
increase overall clarity, make the leads brigher and shine through more, like the acid line that sounds well.
overall you are almost there, so keep pushing it http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
roakanan
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Posted : Oct 22, 2013 22:34
yep
actually what i did on this bass is split the signal in two with one lowpassed with a bass enhancer and then the other one hipassed with a filter delay ....i guess this is the fuck up !
i m going to rework on that specially as for the rest of the mix .
gonna work out all Klippel and Supergroover advises .
Klippel i kind of like triplets but will take your point in consideration .....if i have time who knows make a strickly 4/4 finish instead .
anyway thanks a lot for support ,
really apreciate that .
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