Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Nov 8, 2006 15:36
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Frank , Few things .. (And only the truth) :
1 . Think you should work on your loops , 1-2 Is not enough on this kind of style .
2 . Bass kik together sound nice (For fullon 1 is great , But if you wish to be darker you should hill the all track up by giving some more life and dominant in - In the both areas up + down) .
3 . Hh staying and runnig the same for almost all the track , Why ? Why not change the rhythm and the movement in here and there ? Think its become boring after an 3-4 min' . (Also give them some power and living , Sound to quiet imo) .
4 . More synth ! .
5 . Work on your breaks .
6 . Sorry to say but there is nothing new with this kind of music and all is done already , Heard this style 1000 times before , Sound realy dry , simple usual fullon . Make all being more unique & curiosity .
About the quality .. Sound nice but need in here much more elments in , Efects , Fx's And all the others i wrote + Some more hardish leads to get the all perfect picture .
Good luck then ..
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