knocz
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Posted : Oct 2, 2010 16:55:29
Hi!
I've got this track in progress, and I'd like to hear from you about it.
The drums are either non existent or the same loop over and over again, I still want to work on the kick, make more breaks, it needs some equalizing and mixing, etc., but you can get the general idea from this.
Here's the track:
Please share your feedback!
Taii
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Posted : Oct 2, 2010 20:46
Very nice job 5:30 to the end i enjoyed most
imho you could cut less highs on the synth sound around 6:20
other things just what you said
also i like the snare very much
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Oct 3, 2010 12:57
yeah great sounds eheh
imo, the kick is a bit dry i dunno....
bass... a bit less of release or cut the little squares? P
2.45 nice arpegi I want a spare brain.... or 2.
knocz
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Posted : Oct 4, 2010 03:16
Hey thanks for the feedback.
I cut less off the high in that synth sound in minute 6:20 and worked on the drums. I think it still needs more raises, but I'll do that later.
I like the bass as is, I already have cuts in the squares (I never like having one bass note ending right when another starts, the notes need to breath.. )
Here is the track with the alterations, in it's current state. Please give me more feedback about the panning, frequencies, values, etc., and what you would do to it if it were your's..
Plasmorh
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 00:51
i would select it all and press R (reverse) ahaha
kidding.. though it would be fun...
kick is better imo, nice play at 7 mins...
funny atmosphere eheh
keep going on and on and on
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Posted : Nov 9, 2010 18:19
hey there , you re reviews made me come check u out You are a very imaginative person , i liked the track ,but i would take just about 20BPM i just cant dance that fast without fellin like a rabbit having sex,
Maine Coon
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Posted : Nov 9, 2010 22:28
High-tech Nitzhonot - cool!
MrMaunus
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 16:24
Hey! nice sounding stuff Liked the end from 6:59 most. What came to my mind is you could have more melodies backed with the nice fx u have there? Mixing side seems pretty good. The bass seemed to take space from kick, but as you said you like it the way it is. And snare muddied the mix bit. Some parametric eq cut perhaps at some region of snare? And little detail: some well feedbacked delay (with some panning automation) to the crash would work in my mind at least.
knocz
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Posted : Nov 14, 2010 17:51
Thanks for the reviews!
@MrManus Where do you thinks it's lacking melodies?
I play about 8 different crashes throughout the track, so what do you suggest for the delay on them? Just on the ones that start on the downbeat? What's your idea with this? to have a non synced delay on them so you hear the crashes fade away, a long delay, short delay?
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MrMaunus
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Posted : Dec 9, 2011 21:43
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On 2010-11-14 17:51, knocz wrote:
Thanks for the reviews!
@MrManus Where do you thinks it's lacking melodies?
I play about 8 different crashes throughout the track, so what do you suggest for the delay on them? Just on the ones that start on the downbeat? What's your idea with this? to have a non synced delay on them so you hear the crashes fade away, a long delay, short delay?
Firstly sorry about the delayed answer.. I've been away quite a while. I was meaning with melodies stuff like that begins at 2:40 about. (Seems the rest of the song has plenty of melodies after lead in.. Not sure if they were all there when I wrote to you) (And fourish minutes like those much) The delay was my idea to the crashes like the one in about 5 min and the one ending the track. Maybe shortish delay with plenty feedback? Maybe some experimenting with that? And maybe some warping to that delay? These were just some ideas I had.. Not sure if they were good or not
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i just cant dance that fast without fellin like a rabbit having sex,
