knocz
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Posted : Sep 13, 2013 12:34:08
Hi community! G'mornin!
I've had this in my drawer for quite some time now, and started using it in my live.. the idea is to keep it a little simple so I can build it and upon it while doing a show, and it's feels awesome to play that last riff \m/
However, I feel I need a new bassline for the 1:55 section, and that I could make much more out of this..
nebula nova
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Posted : Sep 13, 2013 17:12
well, go ahead! I think there is a lot in there that really could be put to the front- not least the guitar; and I am not too enthusiastic about the bassline either; mostly because the notes blend into another to a ddegregeethatsit sounds like one continuous note.
nebula nova
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Posted : Sep 13, 2013 17:15
well, go ahead! I think there is a lot in there that really could be put to the front- not least the guitar; and I am not too enthusiastic about the bassline either; mostly because the notes blend into another to a ddegregeethatsit sounds like one continuous note- sorry bout the double post;
knocz
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Posted : Sep 22, 2013 12:41
Thanks man! Yeah, I still need to fine tune the amp envelopes, but it's a neverending task to tweak and tweak some more.. and yeah the mix get this too: it can always be a little better, but in this case I think the beginning sounds could have a better mix / more dynamic contrasts.
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Posted : Oct 8, 2013 09:51
About the kick/bass :
- it lacks bass. Did you Highpass them ?
- shorten the bass notes length
The mix lacks also a bit of depth. Try playing more with reverbs and contrasting with a long verb for far sounds, a short one with good early reflections for sound in the middle and more dry sound in your face for the front. It should give contrast in positioning of the sounds !
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smoker
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Posted : Oct 8, 2013 17:16
really cool track can you tell me what vst you using from your guitar?
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Posted : Oct 9, 2013 16:48
I don't really like guitars in psy,, but his is nice playfull shizzz, I like the 1:50'ish part, I think that bass is just fine,, but if get bored with it after many plays, u can ofcourse make new mix for ssets,, just to freshen thingz up,, like the 2:50 bass jumps alsu,, mm maybe some play with rock drummin thing at 3:15 part before the usual kick? anyway pretty decent ,, keep it up!
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Posted : Oct 9, 2013 18:43
nice track, you got some cool ideas.
I would also change that bass, to a more static one without a progression and a bit faster percussions https://soundcloud.com/hazak
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