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roakanan
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Posted : May 15, 2013 03:15:42
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hey guys ,what you think about both the sound and the style ?
any comments welcome .
hope you l enjoy .
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roakanan
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Posted : May 15, 2013 03:16
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klippel
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Posted : May 15, 2013 14:09
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nice vibe you got there.
i find the snare is too loud in volume and sometimes the mix seems a bit harsh. try to make the sound a bit more homogenic.
good and deep music!
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel
"I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons |
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roakanan
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Posted : May 15, 2013 19:48
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thanks mate ,
i ll try lower the snare .any ideas how i could get the sound homogenic ...which parts did you find harsh ?
thankds for the feedback .
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klippel
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Posted : May 17, 2013 08:40
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the percussion is generally harsh? the high hat, the crash all have a sound to them as if they are hyped with saturation/distortion or something?
could be you have some sort of finalizer on the master as well that overhypes the whole track? whats your listenig environment?
music is ace really  http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel
"I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons |
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metamorphosis music
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Posted : May 17, 2013 14:13
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great track mate, really lovely music and atmosphere , sounds and production are good but yeh few minor mix tweaks like klippel suggested and its there,
keep em coming! https://soundcloud.com/alon-chen |
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roakanan
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Posted : May 18, 2013 05:33
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thanks a lot guys for taking the time and sweet comments !
about my listening environment ,i have a nice little studio ,but not treated the acoustic yet nor got proper monitors .my next step in a couple of months .
i mix a lot on my headphones .
on this version , i ve tried to make a mastering (of some sort) myself ,with a 3 band dynamic processor from live and l1 ultrmaximizer ,and yess i ve hyped the highs and the lows .
i didn t put it on the master tho ,i ve exported my mix then reload it and put the mastering fx on the track .
i m gonna upload the raw mix , you ll be able to tell me about it .
thanks a lot for your feedback ,
cheers
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klippel
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Posted : May 19, 2013 10:42
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the problem is with mastering in the same place as mixing: you will always mix according to your systems flaws.. be it headphones that are usually soft sounding so you end up with too bright mixes or bad treated rooms where you mix according to your rooms modes in the subs and so on.. thats why normally music should be mastered on a different and well treated system to correct your mistakes..
when doing "masterings" (i know what i am talking about, lol) it fucks over the mix more then it helps. usually you listend to the track so long you overdo it and squash and hype the shit out of it. but i still try, nothing wrong with that, just something to learn in addition..
would be cool to hear the mix without master plugins to see how your plain mix sounds like, i bet its much better
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel
"I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons |
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supergroover
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Posted : May 22, 2013 17:51
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Change the snare. Or lower the volume and make it a bit shorter.
The rest of the sounds could use a bit more reverb I think. Or at least some sounds with bigger reverbs. That will give it some more space and finished sound.
I'd also recommend to put all these ideas in a 7-9 minute track. Not 12 minutes.
Good luck!
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : May 23, 2013 22:17
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nice music |
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roakanan
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Posted : May 24, 2013 02:03
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thanks for the comments and help guys .
working like a maniac these days ,no time for music ...
plus ,i ve just done a system restore and can t open my previous sets yet ! bummer
so basically i will love to try all the tips here but will be in a week or two .
anyway i will load a raw mix version in first place next time i hit to the studio .
cheers
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roakanan
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Posted : May 28, 2013 19:06
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roakanan
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Posted : Jun 3, 2013 01:08
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Hi there ,
just post again in case anyone would give some advices about the raw mix .still not changed anything cause can t open my set ,my system drive failed so will take even more time to work on it ...
cheers
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