Grevinsky
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Posted : Jul 23, 2012 23:16
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Kick and base sound fine by me, i am not on my main speakers so i cannot comment on the low end. When everything runs in the mix tho its not so clear.
That is mixing problem. But still if this is ure second song its very good.
Im sorry to say, but i really dislike the first lead.
There is some strange clipping noises, you can hear it very well when its only kick and base example at 2.10. , perhaps some overlapping frequencies, you sidechained ure kick and base?.
You got good structure, but i would work more with the leads, they are not so interessting.
Getting more interessting at 3.16.
I suggest you use less buildups as well. The track can keep on rolling you dont need a rise that often.
You have some good things going on, but you could improve ure work of percussions, more unique builds and work more with ure leads.
Otherwise good work.
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