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Just finished my track, tell me what you think guys
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dane89
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Posted : Mar 5, 2011 22:36:25
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psyraal
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Posted : Mar 5, 2011 22:43
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I hate this shit, first that sounds like trance, check yourself, and second, this ain't a advertising forum you know, if you want real and technical opinion or advising, please say so, or pm one of the folks that are happy to help you, but don't do this shit, it sounds like you just wanna spread your music as much as possible..
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dane89
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Posted : Mar 5, 2011 22:50
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offcourse i want a "real and technical opinion" why else would i post it in a producer forum? You got some issues man... sort it out |
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psyraal
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Posted : Mar 5, 2011 22:59
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On 2011-03-05 22:50, dane89 wrote:
offcourse i want a "real and technical opinion" why else would i post it in a producer forum? You got some issues man... sort it out
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Oh ok, so next time try to say "need technical advice" or something instead of "what do you guys think", cause that gives a bad ideia
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Freeflow
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 00:48
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Nice track dane89
I would work more on the stereo width and really make that pad as big as possible, as i guess there is room for it, Also all minimal sounds, make some stereo delay tricks, and do some Psytrance tricks like Lfo modulate the pitch and automate it for the ending sections with some delay to ring out.
And make the Rev kick drop way bigger, When you work this minimal try and make the sounds as big and phat as possible..
That just my 2 cents right now...
PM if you want to talk, i make Trance as well, But i bet you can give me more advice than i can give you, im more of sound tweaker than a arranger.
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dane89
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 02:04
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Thanks freeflow. btw do you think the main bass is too dominant? |
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timmyleary
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 11:49
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I like the it. Reminds me of the artist Neelix. Good work...keep on making some more. |
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Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 14:56
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Nice at the mello part but theres lots of work to do , You dont have here an dominant hh loops or spaciel percussion to lift it up so track sound 'Stuck' abit and stand , Could't hear streaming in or somthing that will take me high and let the track run and turn it on . Can agree with Freeflow .. All sound 'In the center' So open it to be more big & stereophonic .
Keep it up ..
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psyraal
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 15:05
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On 2011-03-06 14:56, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
Can agree with Freeflow .. All sound 'In the center' So open it to be more big & stereophonic .
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Yes, try adding a 'Stereo Enhancer' onto your lead, you will get a lot more dynamics in your track..
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dane89
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 22:30
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Thanks guys, will try to add some stereo width to the track and some hats/perc. I will also try to change the intro a bit. |
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