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Johnny Digital - Crack the code (draft)
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sy000321
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Posted : Apr 12, 2006 14:28
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Hi
For a long time i didn't post anything here, so i guess it's time for me to do it.
http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=055QGLV9YW39P1YFGLLKTUJZ88
it's not complete, the list of things i wich to improve here is huge, but i thing it's a nice snippet for you people to hear.
please give me your comments
thanks
joao
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a3k
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Posted : Apr 12, 2006 14:31
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yes i will give a peek 
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etnarama
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Posted : Apr 12, 2006 18:18
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Elad
Tsabeat/Sattel Battle
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Posted : Apr 12, 2006 18:22
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starts good, some psy sounds very nice 
the synth around 0:50 i would take couple of db up, while listening i think also may be all of the leads ? they are very good but i find it too much backgroundish..
i would turn em all up and group them all with compressor or limiter so it wont clip.
the new lead in 2:40 i dont like at all.. not the sound and the melody. after it gets automated it sounds better tho.
nice work keep up
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Fredini
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Posted : Apr 12, 2006 20:51
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meqie johnny!!! Good track my friend, allucinating trip !!! groovy psy bass !!! good construction throught the demo, hope to hear the full version soon , kepp it up! dou te o toq pa semana pa combinarmos algo abraço Fred |
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K_Lapso
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Posted : Apr 12, 2006 21:35
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yehhh nice trank
I like it
keep up
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OpTiKoOl
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Posted : Apr 13, 2006 00:55
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Apr 13, 2006 15:35
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sy000321
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Posted : Apr 13, 2006 19:10
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thanks for the replys. i'm very glad you liked it.
tsabeat, thanks for the sugestion, this track hasn't got a single compressor in it, but i'll try to compress part of the leads to make them fit better
i tried to listen to it on small headphones and the bass sound was too crappy... damm vb1 
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Apr 13, 2006 20:18
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If you change that superduper overused kick, that could be great for you my friend.
You are not finished, so mix problems and suggestions are not for now i think. You can improve the percussion part for sure, more changes and intelligent rhythms is good.
If u make some automation for cutoff for your synths, it can be more interesting.
nice work
bom
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TOPE
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Posted : Apr 14, 2006 14:14
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Cool man!!!
Nice leads and positive flavored track!
I am not crazy about paning de open High hts for one of the sides, at least so much and when they are so present, another thinhg would be changing the bass notes some times...but that's a matter of taste!!!
Keep on!
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Lithium
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 03:00
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hi there joao
nice track as usual from you. glad you´ve posted this one. good sharp leading sounds with envolving rythm behind resulting in a good track transmiting good feelings.
keep it up
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sy000321
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 16:53
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thanks again
i got the chance to hear the track in a different speaker system and got to notice how the hats are present... my monitors smear the highs a bit i got to bring them down a bit or eq them or something
sound surgeon, you got me there on the kick, since it was posted here i can't get away from it, but i'm staring to layer it just to give it a bit more caracter and get a different sound.
TOPE, you're right about the hats, i'll be using headphones to check the final mix, but about the bass i do change notes, but i guess it's too imperceptible, same thing with some lead sounds wich have minute changes but maybe that's not working so i'll have to review that stuff again and again and again
thanks again for the tips, reviews and comments
i'm already working on a new version of the same tracks, hope to get it right soon
thanks
joao
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