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its done!!!!! you wont belive its reason.
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 01:49
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im done with take this the finalversion is posted. Im sure you could belive its reason, but the sample of my next track sounds like much more.
communicate your thoughts to me through electronic pixel arrangment!
anyone know a cheap place to get logic or cubase im ready to move on. or where i can get a replacement dongle i have cubase sl3 but lent my dongle and never got it back.
thanks community
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 02:30
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squ1d
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 02:44
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mmmm
looks like pingpong balls in the beggining, really psychedelic!! great start
am i listening to some indians in the back? cool man!
0:52 i cant listen to the man speaking, cant tell what he says.
great synth coming up in 1:25, nice claps dude!
mmm some of the synths remind me of... dunno... maybe talamasca? or 220v.. great stuff/farts =)!
nice work in the breakdown great break!
farts back again =)) i love those farts!!
Just would wish u had some melody on them!
Oh!! Cool melody coming up now!! Nice work, but maybe too much reverb! its a bit faded away inside the mix...
mmm weird break in 4:04, didnt like it a lot.. again in 4:20, not my cup of tea =)
nice stuff on the break! great sample bro!! nice work with it!!
Im not too fond of your snare rolls, but its good!
Nice synths again!!
Lacking melody i think =(( i love melodies, even more than acid lines heheh =)
great stuff bro, really well mixed/mastered! just wish you would put some more melodies in the track!! Other than that i loved it! Oh, i didnt like those small snare rolls too, but they're good, i know ppl that like them =)
gr8 work man! now ill finish workin on my track ehhehe =)
cya
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Qualium
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 08:29
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Ooh, very nice FaceHead. Please ignore Squ1d's request for fewer snare rolls and more melodies - that'd be turning the track into something it's not. It's fine just as it is. Maybe one hole I could pick is that it sounds like it's peaking a bit much a bit too early between 2:50 and 3:50. It kinda sounds like it's already at the end of the track, when it's still developing. But that's a small criticism.
Great work - synth and percussion. Awesome breakdowns. And to pull it all off with just Reason is proof that you've mastered that program. Time to upgrade your tools I think. Reason is still a bit restrictive in its scope, and there's a lot of new instruments around with which I know you could experiment and have a lot of fun.
Keep it up!  :):)
Q.
PS @Squ1d - I'm not trying to diss you at all - your personal preference for more melodic stuff is perfectly valid, it's just that psytrance doesn't all have to be that way. |
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Tricossoma
Tricossoma
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 16:42
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Methodic Marble
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 17:31
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This track is very nice, cool rhytmes and lead´s.simple but very groovy.. 
3:23-very cool melodi.(maybe full it more a little bit?).
5:48 _great lead.... 
again maybe full it more,with more sound´s (fx).??
COOL TRaCk ...........
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 18:22
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Hey man FaceHead! Hope all's well.
Nice start to the track. The snare at 1.30 something a bit too loud i think. nice build ups but try and use those swooshes a little more. they are nice and subtle but with a little more presence i think it will give the track more life i think. Also maybe use more reverb on the crashes?
Cool breaks, they fit well with the overall groove of the track. (Oh Boy do i need to learn to make breaks, uff!!)
At 3.50, there's that snare again, am very sorry but i don't like it. Maybe its becasue its too loud. Otherwise the other percussion work seems ok. Good choice of samples, like i said before i Love them!
Aye! Super build up at 5 something and good intro to the lead and the lead itself is really nice but i'd lke it to be 'thicker' if you know what i mean.
Good work man! I like your synth work, percussion (except for the snare Sorry!) you build ups are nice but again, work on those swooshes, also i'd like to hear more atmospheres.
Anyway, I really like your music man and look forward to hearing more form you!
Good Luck and Best Wishes!!
Bharath.
 Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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Chemical Reaction
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Posted : Oct 23, 2005 05:07
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rubal
Rubal / Soundkraft
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Posted : Oct 23, 2005 11:03
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nice start...
@ 1.22 ....nice grooves...
@2.55 nice kick in.. nice synth... get more sound there... i mean back the melody up more.. its more groovy still... bring it out more..will sound very nice.
@5.30 nice synth... crazy psy synth..
nice groove....
@ 5.45 nice back u..harmony synth... very groovy..
facehead...this ones by far the best ive heard from
u..... maybe im underestimating u..
but i ike this one the best.
wa s/w u used?
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 24, 2005 01:17
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still only reason im practicing in cubase and logic but will not be able to properly use them till I buy a legit version anyone know a cheap vendor or have used copies?? |
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Nobita
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Posted : Oct 24, 2005 01:55
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I really like this track, it's pretty varied and the breaks are well placed. Great sounds for your leads and bass. Maybe add more stuff going on when the beat peaks, such as various FX and background psychedelia but really it's a very enjoyable track as it is. |
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