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Introducing Imation !!!
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imation
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Posted : Feb 3, 2009 16:41:51
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Hey everybody.. I am new in the music producing world, and also new to this site.. I have been trying to make some nice fullon for about a year, and now i have completed a track which i think is good for my limitations.. I hope to get some feedback..
I hope to get some connections on this site, so please reply to this post and i will reply on your posts with feedback..
Hope you enjoy my track:
imation - brightness (140 bpm)
http://www.speedyshare.com/335277153.html |
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Crystalien
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 4, 2009 10:24
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hey guy! Welcome to ISRATRANCE community
Hope - you like it here!
Now listening to the "Brightness"...
First of all - pretty good for the beginning !
I like the overall sound in this song,
303 synth around 2:30 adds the joy 
also 303 licks here and there... the background pads come exactly intact with lead synth, suits good here
Respect and greetings!
pls try my trax
 Crystalien
HEAVY METAL GOA
http://www.myspace.com/crystaliens |
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imation
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Posted : Feb 5, 2009 17:25
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Ty for your comment Crystalien 
Anyone elso who can tell me what is good and bad in this track?
Would like some constructive critisism =) |
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imation
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Posted : Feb 7, 2009 23:40
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bump! |
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lazydazy
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Posted : Feb 9, 2009 12:07
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nice track full of interesting ideas!
good flow with lots of positivity!
a lil more work in making the bassline and kick more upfront could make a big difference to the power of this song.
otherwise its really out there!
the melodies specially lovin em!
keep up the nice wrk
cheers
dazy |
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imation
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Posted : Feb 9, 2009 12:59
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ty very much lazydazy..
I am currently editing the track, with some ekstra fx and another synth for the lead in the last part of the track + new bassline.. I will post it when im done.. =) |
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lazydazy
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Posted : Feb 9, 2009 13:39
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nice..pump up the kick by eq at 62 hz and dip the bassline around that freq (notch, not wide)
also apply an eq on the entire track and kill everything below 30 Hz |
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imation
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Posted : Feb 11, 2009 15:44
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anyone else ? |
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Lauge
Lauge
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Posted : Feb 11, 2009 18:16
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Hello Imation...
I can really hear that you have progressed in sound and composition over the past months. To mention some things I didn't like about it: First of all the style/genre or whatever you want to name it (But that's sure a matter of taste) Second you need to eq some of that mud away from the buttom of the track. Third I think you need re-do your percussion part (add more stuff and change some of the samples) Fourth, I think you need to have a look on your melodic parts of the track aswell. It's not that they are bad, just not super. When I listen to melodies in music, I'd like to remember so I can sing it for myself (maybe just myself who feels like that)
Keep up your work, you are deffinetly heading somewhere at the moment.
 :):)
www.myspace.com/orbitallauge
www.myspace.com/babalauge
www.myspace.com/babagnohm |
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imation
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Posted : Feb 11, 2009 19:44
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Thank you lauge =)
Well i know my percussion sucks, and thats what ill be working a lot with on the next tracks.. The melodies are as good as i can make them, but definetly im sure harder work will make them better.. =) |
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