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Posted : Nov 6, 2010 10:12:44
Good day!
Made this track in the last couple of weeks and wanted to share it.
The story,the way i have it in my head is kind of a nighttime ride through a dark forest,with all sorts of predators and creatures lurking around in the shadows while their roars and voices echoe in the woods...
I have no idea if it makes sense like that to other people's ears,but i wanted to share my thoughts anyway.So if you listen to it i'd like to know what do you think.
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 21:32
real nice work amigo, sound gettiing more complex in layering and arrangements,work some more on a crisp main lead sound, and keep the movement changing, for example 2:30 - 3:00 its the same sounds for , maybe evolve or add more, continous progression, but some excellent trippy sounds, hypnotic and nice, keep up the good work amigo
peace
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Posted : Nov 11, 2010 22:22
Thanks Minus!
Uploaded a new version,raised it a couple of bpm's,changed kicks,basslines and added alot of atmo work,should sound much deeper now.I hope it hasn't got noisy...
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Posted : Nov 14, 2010 00:16
Nice track, I love the atmosphere in this one. When I listen to it and read what you said & look at your avatar I can imagine what you said
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Posted : Nov 14, 2010 00:47
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On 2010-11-14 00:16, onoma wrote:
Nice track, I love the atmosphere in this one. When I listen to it and read what you said & look at your avatar I can imagine what you said
Thanks man.It's great to know it comes out the way i want it to and someone gets it the same way i do.
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Posted : Nov 15, 2010 14:13
For sure kind of wild ..
Very good , Qualitative unique art work but try work on your sound . Bass kik can be much more larg & massive , Out and open , Deep and harder , Close to us and live , Here and near (What bass do you use ?) . Hh need more attention , Liket the loops but sound can be much more sharper , More out .. And + The right vol . Very good atmospheres i realy liket , Open mind , In the rigt places and vol but let them be more cinematic with an grand sound . Try work more slow .. You will find there all those things i have just talkt about . You work on FL or Reason ? .
Super ! I enjoy it very much .. Realy drive and stream ..
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Posted : Nov 15, 2010 15:31
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Theres is somthing more that 'ablaze' in my head to say Take it as a tip or what ever .. Look .. I dont realy know or heard in the last 20 + years many artists in our world that can get an good sound (At the down area - Bass Kik) over the 148 Bpm . Theres Pps Project with an 1 track i have heard and 1 of Gizmo Kaka . Belive me work 142 (You have an great ideas with hh loops so it will make it faster) . With those crisp (That minus wrote) and air inside your music you will get an space , Deep sound , We wrong many time when we think Fast = Power .
Keep the good work ..
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Posted : Nov 15, 2010 21:32
Thanks mate,really happy that you like it.
I know the sound overally needs alot of work.I work on Ableton and i use Alien 303 mostly for basslines and vanguard sometimes.
Thing is I do not have monitors,i work on a 5.1 system which is really unsuitable for making music and especially this fast-multilayered genre.Midrange is really bad and it gets mixed with the lows on the sub,it's a mess!So i do not spend really much time EQ'ing,will do soon on all my tracks when i get my monitors Also track is on it's 1st phase,will do alot of changes in the meantime Started a couple of slower tracks,surely it's easier to build stuff on lower speeds but i just love 150-152!
Thanks for listening and for the detailed comment bro,cheers!
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Posted : Jan 10, 2011 14:14
Hello!
Uploaded a new version(on the same link)
Finally got my monitors and got back on this track,i like this one!Did some more work on the atmos and added some percussive stuff.Sound quality is much better now i believe,what do you think? http://soundcloud.com/epimetheus
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Posted : Jan 10, 2011 19:25
real nice track epi, fukin trippy as hell and amazing flow,sound quality has also become much clearer and louder, really liked it, the atmosperic sounds u used also have given it nice flow, but try and make them more eerrie, maybe use some fx on them, but whhat ever, real nice work man!
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