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Inspired by The Delta... 137bpm dark & industrial
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Fragletrollet
Fragletrollet
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Posted : Jun 3, 2005 02:11
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Freeflow
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jun 3, 2005 03:16
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some parts are interesting but some parts i think is a bit stiff..
some more variation maybe...
i think you should work more on rhythms! get more percussion! as its very industrial you could have some more screws and bolts droping in a big industrial factory! droping here and there to add some movement and action.... or maybe some tribal drums to add a touch of tribalism...
i really dont have much to offer for feedback...
sure a track like this has its time somewhere in the night at a party! but its not something i would want to hear for hours..
keep working and let me hear the final version... dont be shy to experiment with the track a little...
surprise us
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Aldus B
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 6, 2005 02:00
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The link isn't working for me |
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