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Inspired by The Delta... 137bpm dark & industrial

Fragletrollet
Fragletrollet

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Posted : Jun 3, 2005 02:11
Hey! Soon finished with a new track, so I wanted some feedback.


http://www.home.no/fragletrollet/XV.mp3
Freeflow
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Posted : Jun 3, 2005 03:16
some parts are interesting but some parts i think is a bit stiff..
some more variation maybe...

i think you should work more on rhythms! get more percussion! as its very industrial you could have some more screws and bolts droping in a big industrial factory! droping here and there to add some movement and action.... or maybe some tribal drums to add a touch of tribalism...

i really dont have much to offer for feedback...
sure a track like this has its time somewhere in the night at a party! but its not something i would want to hear for hours..

keep working and let me hear the final version... dont be shy to experiment with the track a little...

surprise us





Aldus B
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Posted : Jun 6, 2005 02:00
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