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InsaneExperiment - Magmatic Planet
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daark
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Posted : Apr 4, 2012 15:14:41
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Argonauticus
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Posted : Apr 5, 2012 18:53
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Wow nice sounds ! but atmosphere here not good, i think this track need little bit of work and they be perfect ! |
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daark
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Posted : Apr 5, 2012 21:46
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 8, 2012 17:28
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Fat!. I think the sound which comes on at 1:43 could possible be slowely introduced before, like a headsup, it could be a little bit weter also. But they work well togheter the crispy sound and the lead.
I feel something is needed between 3.25 and 4.12.
It evolves nice with the pad in the later part in the mix.
Really fat at 5.55!  .
I would add some sounds inbetween of the synths to keep it more interessting.
Its a cool song, but you could work a little bit more with it.
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Apr 8, 2012 18:28
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Nice track... i really like the leads. Atmosphere is a bit strange but Good strange. Some new percussive elements would fit in nice from minute 3:00 onward I think.
I loved the drop at the intro it caused a strong impression on me. Sometimes I felt that those strange atmospheres could use a bit more of modulations.
peace!
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Equilizyme
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Posted : Apr 10, 2012 19:03
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good weird! especially the second half you have some great leads going on, with these scratchy noises on the sides that really make a great overall sound. The break down is a bit too major in key for the whole track, but it does sort of fit given the strangeness overall... I think you might be able to use the stereo field a wee bit more to make some of those complimentary noises stand out a bit, and to give the perc some flow to it, eg. right at 6 minutes you could have the perc move in te stereo field to give a nice change. have that open hat go really wide or something and the closed hats more to the left maybe.
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daark
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Posted : Apr 10, 2012 20:42
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thanks guys i really enjoy the feedback
With this one i really had to delete half the sounds in the track to make it sound clean like now. I was like deleting like crazy.
But i know what you mean there is not really anything big happening. Pretty simple basic stuff.
Cheerz
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Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Apr 11, 2012 11:19
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Sure there work to do , When this is nice basic to your track . Theres interesting areas in , Here and there , But not realy much happen in your story . Bass and kik are to close And never change in there - (Notes or any othere interesting move/dramatic hit) So all bring those feeling of kind of boring , You should work more on loops - More mass of 1X1X1X1 At the same time , differents , Together (This is 1-2 loops who runing there all over and the same cant take me anywhere) , Improve the breaks And the intro (Too simple imo) , More leads , Better mix , And i realy agree with Argonauticus - Alot of atmos are needed ! Track sound dry And/So will open more levels behind and bring it be more cinematic .
Keep the good work m8
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