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daark
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Posted : Apr 19, 2013 23:55:22
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Geom3
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Posted : Apr 20, 2013 00:04
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hmm . it different il giv u that..im tryin to work out if i like that bassline or not...it overall mix has cute edge to it..
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daark
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Posted : Apr 20, 2013 02:11
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 21, 2013 19:42
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Hey man.
I think you could refine the baseline a littlebit, it certainly has a touch to it, but i think you can bring it out more.
I think the beginning dont fit with the later part, you could integrate it better in some way.
Awesome with the playbox 3.04, you could reverb it abit tho.
Haha wierd but cool 4.10.
The transition is not so smooth tho, you could work more on the small build to 4.10.
5.13 it feels abit too empty,maybe you could build a little bit further with the percussions.
5.40 it feels abit like a new song is starting, which become little bit confusing.
I like the style, but now it feels abit messy and spreaded out. You have lots of idea trough the track, but dont really develope them, instead you go too a next phase, and that kills the story a little bit.
But you got a lot of cool things happening, but does not feel really finished.
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makus
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Posted : Apr 21, 2013 20:25
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man its the rhythm, where is the music? production wise it is ok, hard to say though if you add something there it might change. i would definitely like to hear there more leads and fx
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daark
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Posted : Apr 22, 2013 00:26
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Too minimal ? 
Its super simple and not good enough elements from start I hate structure big reverbs and all the mainstream sounds by the way but this is too simple synthesis and arrangement and not that quality sounds....
thanks for replies guys it helps alot
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makus
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Posted : Apr 22, 2013 03:46
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oh dude i dont mean commercial sounds in any way. more interesting leads will be a benefit imo
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daark
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Posted : Apr 22, 2013 14:57
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Yes that is what i said I meant something else like big drooops and breaks and stuff like that anyway it is empty i made it awhile ago and rearranged it abit. I hear the mix is ok more or less but the synthesis is weak and no modulations and no automations everything supposed to be super big but is very weak. Thanks for comments guys You need to hear this sometimes because we often fall in love with our own stuff and become def .
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