knocz
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Posted : Dec 21, 2017 21:00
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The five assed monkey!
Like! All up until duvdev start singing 
Forget the contest, finish the tune for yourself (and all of us who silently listen to these tunes).
The starting bassline seems extremely low - subsonic stuff, I'm not sure this would work nicely blasted in high volumes or not.. but due to this I consider the beat really only comes in at 1:40.
In this initial section it spans over 4 sections of 64 beats , and during these 4 sections it seems it's talking a bit of time to evolve - no due to new elements being introduced, but because the old elements remain there. Maybe it could benefit from removing some element in the second part of each section, or lowering a bit their place in the mix to make more room for the new elements.
3:29 to 4:48 - you have 3 sections of 64bars; in the 2nd and 3rd sections you introduced a nice synth lead and modulate the heck out of it during these 2 sections - may I suggest to add an arpeggiator somewhere in the middle, and manipulate the arp rate to make this lead modulate even more?
Then @5:41 it goes down, the singing comes in, and it leads to nothingness  I enjoyed the tune so far, just need to close up this last part and you're good to go
Please keep it up and show us more of it!
  Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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