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I really need a review for this one!!

dark pulse


Started Topics :  6
Posts :  15
Posted : Apr 29, 2003 12:18
Hi to all you psyfolks!

Here is a preview version of my future release : "divergent memories".
I never had so much fun in coposing a track, and it is I think my favorite of all the tracks I've made.
so please!! it's a demo version, not the definitive one, and the mastering is quite awefull, but I need advice on the construction and melody!!
thank you very much!
here's the link :
http://www.vitaminic.com/cgi-php/get_file.php3?modo=1&bid=454673

if it doesn't work, you can try to download it on my main page : http://stage.vitaminic.com/darkpulse/
the track is "divergent memories --DEMO--"           --- dark pulse aka Principles of Flight ---
psychedelic experience at
http://stage.vitaminic.com/darkpulse/
(old stuff)
Flotser


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Posts :  54
Posted : Apr 30, 2003 15:26
Hi there

first of all, note that i'm a real n00b at production......
anyway....
The begining until 1:00 sounds very promising and i like it alot, like the vocals, also like the bassline that comes in near 1:00.... but then you start with something realy different..... and not powerful enough IMO.
i dont know but something is missing and all sounds too flat..... dont know how to describe it.
i like those "alien" sounds, but its not enough.

3:11 enters a cool little melody...
but i think the 'reversed kicks' that come at 3:22 kinda ruin it.... i say remove them
3:40 I realy realy like the way you manipulate that juicy synth
after this point i say everything sounds just perfect also what comes at 4:20
I like those melodies )

i think your melodies and ideas are gr8 but you need to work on the sound part, to make it sound more pro... also i know its difficult, but try to connect the intro better with the rest of the track...

good luck man


dark pulse


Started Topics :  6
Posts :  15
Posted : Apr 30, 2003 19:30
actually, that was the demo version and I've quite improved the track since, but with your advice it is going to be a lot more easier!!
thank you a lot, I'm going to work hard on my sound!
I'll let u know when it's over!
thank u again           --- dark pulse aka Principles of Flight ---
psychedelic experience at
http://stage.vitaminic.com/darkpulse/
(old stuff)
Flotser


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Posts :  54
Posted : Apr 30, 2003 23:41
sure man i would be happy to hear the final version,
good luck again

Electronic Mind


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Posts :  9
Posted : May 1, 2003 19:18
Ok started to listen those vocal samples are the same as a dark soho track..This is not good....
Electronic Mind


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Posts :  9
Posted : May 1, 2003 19:19
the rest of the tunes ok though but i dont think its cool that uve copied dark soho like that..
dark pulse


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Posts :  15
Posted : May 1, 2003 20:19
sorry... to be honnest I've never listened to dark soho!!
oh well I'll find new samples.
what is the dark soho track name??           --- dark pulse aka Principles of Flight ---
psychedelic experience at
http://stage.vitaminic.com/darkpulse/
(old stuff)
Electronic Mind


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Posts :  9
Posted : May 1, 2003 22:33
Suckobus from Sun spot. What film was that sampled from cause its been buging me ever since i heard the dark soho track. Swear ive seen the film.
dark pulse


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Posts :  15
Posted : May 1, 2003 23:29
thanx, I'm gonna check out dark soho,
the movie is Dark City, an ok Sci-fi movie, not the greatest in history, but still pleasant enough
          --- dark pulse aka Principles of Flight ---
psychedelic experience at
http://stage.vitaminic.com/darkpulse/
(old stuff)
Electronic Mind


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Posts :  9
Posted : May 2, 2003 16:09
Is that the one with the bald guys that keep changing the city around. I really liked that movie.
PsyJar
ZeroSequence

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Posts :  132
Posted : May 2, 2003 19:30
Ok
personaly I think the sound is not so good, but that's a 'after' detail (in this case).
I like it, yes. I can see a structure in there, and I also like the story your track is telling me. I like different parts on a track.
Please, show us the final version, after is done...
Best of luck...           "The Light Children Are Awakening!"
dj-panoramix
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics :  43
Posts :  343
Posted : May 9, 2003 15:38
I hear your track and i think it's ok , some sounds are greats ,i just think that your track have not enough rythm,and you must try to look for sounds who work goods together, like when you hear a track and you think there is a really good sound and after you hear that this sound is not one sound but two or three but they work so nice together that you think it's one sound !!This is really nice with waves !!
How many times you make music ?
Where do you come from in france ?
I wish you all the best !!
nico
          www.inpsyde-media.com
www.dj-panoramix.tk

dj.panoramix@inpsyde-media.com
dark pulse


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Posts :  15
Posted : May 9, 2003 19:27
I worked on the sound for this track, the final version is downloadable at vitaminic.com :
http://stage.vitaminic.com/darkpulse/
it's called divergent memories

I've been making music for a couple of months, about 4 or 5, but my new gear is only 1 month old...
... and I live in Paris, or at least in the very near suburb of Paris.

see ya!           --- dark pulse aka Principles of Flight ---
psychedelic experience at
http://stage.vitaminic.com/darkpulse/
(old stuff)
dark pulse


Started Topics :  6
Posts :  15
Posted : May 9, 2003 19:28
you're french too no?           --- dark pulse aka Principles of Flight ---
psychedelic experience at
http://stage.vitaminic.com/darkpulse/
(old stuff)
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