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Strako
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Posted : Nov 23, 2013 09:27:32
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supergroover
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Posted : Nov 23, 2013 11:36
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MODS: please put it in the workshop section.
Overall it sounds pretty nice.
But there are a few things you can improve:
The percussion is a bit sparse. It is just a hihat around 2 minutes. No snare. Of course this could be your style. But it makes it sound a bit empty to my taste.
The bass sounds a bit muddy. It could be tighter. Read the zillion topics about bass for some tips. Maybe add some distortion? The volume of the bass is too high in the first part but falls back in volume in the second. Why is that? Did you master the track yourself?
The goastyle extra kick hits are nice, but make sure they don't come at the same time as the bass. This makes them clash.
Sometimes the levels of some leads need to be a bit higher compared to the kick and bass.
Good luck!
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Strako
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Posted : Nov 24, 2013 00:33
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On 2013-11-23 11:36, supergroover wrote:
MODS: please put it in the workshop section.
Overall it sounds pretty nice.
But there are a few things you can improve:
The percussion is a bit sparse. It is just a hihat around 2 minutes. No snare. Of course this could be your style. But it makes it sound a bit empty to my taste.
The bass sounds a bit muddy. It could be tighter. Read the zillion topics about bass for some tips. Maybe add some distortion? The volume of the bass is too high in the first part but falls back in volume in the second. Why is that? Did you master the track yourself?
The goastyle extra kick hits are nice, but make sure they don't come at the same time as the bass. This makes them clash.
Sometimes the levels of some leads need to be a bit higher compared to the kick and bass.
Good luck!
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Thanks bro !! i need to work more on my percussions. I will see that thread and thanks for that advices, that make me best musician C: tanks a lot and good vibes ! |
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