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Tamara
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Posted : Nov 29, 2010 01:17:01
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Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Nov 29, 2010 12:39
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Liket the end part (When kik stop) Kind of heavenly trip feeling ..
Imo intro is good but to long also can be add more sounds in , Dont say its boring but can be much more interesting , Unique and special , But again its all about what you want to get and definitely this style of yours are particular but different (And dont wrong .. I like those differents) . All track sound nice i just usualy dont like when sounds or elements in music are repeating themselves again and again to many times in but this is more an person taste .
Keep the good work .. 
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Tamara
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Posted : Nov 29, 2010 14:08
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Yeah, the beatless part is quite long...I just don't perceive as intro, it is how I started the track and meant to continue, but then I added a beat part to make it more interesting.
I am still having some rough time with music production software, so I am not still able to be creative as I can  thus the repetition  . Probably it will take a while before I am able to "go crazy" with sounds on a track
Thank you very much for your comment!
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Maine Coon
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Posted : Nov 29, 2010 17:28
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Interesting mix of opposites: calm and unsettling elements. I like it how the cymbals in the middle part are a bit ahead of where they "should" play. It adds a hint of anxiety to the music.
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Tamara
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Posted : Dec 4, 2010 00:17
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On 2010-11-29 17:28, Maine Coon wrote:
Interesting mix of opposites: calm and unsettling elements. I like it how the cymbals in the middle part are a bit ahead of where they "should" play. It adds a hint of anxiety to the music.
What does the voice say?
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Oh, it is from a Macedonian movie called Shadows, it is a girl ghost speaking. First she says that at her grandfather's place always smelled like bread, and that that is a smell worth living for.
At the end, she speaks of how much firebugs there were when she was a kid, and that sitting among them was like entering a constellation
I am glad you liked it, thanks .
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