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i need an expert (link repaired 4shared)
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Equinox Legend
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 19:29:41
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Equinox Legend
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 21:38
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please?
i just wanna now whats missing |
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vipal
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 22:10
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Xsze
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 22:38
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^ that,and put it in the workshop section.
Your music is for movies/games,there is good idea but I dont now,sincerly story isn`t interesting to me,brakes neither,and bass,I dont feel him,maybe some more percussions....
Make some expactations,some strong story to move forward,I dont now maybe this is your thing,but I am tripping bad...
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knocz
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 23:23
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It needs low end.
I don't know what you are going for, but whatever it is you aren't quite there yet. But don't despair! The track has some interesting melodies and curious use of effects on simple sounds..
Get a nice kick (there's an isratrance kick bank somewhere) and a bass 
The way the track sounds now, I would probably go for the simplest bass, which is a simple sine oscillator, with just a tiny tiny touch of FM drive or distortion to give it a bit character, on very low octaves (with a high pass EQ so the sub-bass isn't rumbling), and have a good kick with a lot of character, to counterbalance the situation.
Learn about sound synthesis and synthesizers! Build the sounds and define it's tone and timbre from scratch. And automate whatever you like to make the sounds evolve (your track seems like you were randomly looking for nice sounding presets and good sounding melodies, and then trying to put them together without evolution).
Automation is the key for evolution! (hmm I like this sentence  boom boom boom boom brrrrrrr bap bap bap bap piiuuuuuuuuuuiiip boom boom)
From what I've learned, in sound engineering we can pass by many really good sounds and stuff that sounds really interesting and get really tripped out while searching the depths of every synth, but in music what counts is what you do to those sounds during the time lapse: how you play and control the instrument (or sound source) in order to express yourself.
Keep it going, one day at a time
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orgytime
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 23:42
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