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fuzzikitten
Annunaki
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Posted : Aug 18, 2004 14:26
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Hello all!
Thought I'd post a link to my latest creation and see what the masses think about it.
http://www.deltaperspective.com/music/Fuzzikitten%20-%20Omni%20Science.mp3
Lately I've been writing with the attitude of writing 'music' rather than 'psytrance', so it's kind of gone in an unexpected direction.
It's a little short (5:43), so I'm going to let it sit a bit and then add another lead or so.
Thanks for listening!
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PsyGoatDelic
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Posted : Aug 19, 2004 12:53
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good intro mate... also i liked the hihat on the intro it fits well! the pumping bassline sounds very good!
also good use of sfx but i didnt liked the melody that entering in 0:45... (not my cup of tea) its sounds nice but dont fit much to psytrance.. with that melody its sounds more like a chilling trance.. nice arrangments keep up the good work! im waiting to hear more stuff from u!
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OIL
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Posted : Aug 19, 2004 16:25
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yo mate
the bass is really shy in this track. make it come forth more.
pretty cool style u got man
but i think the groove can be a little better
maybe some more weird sounds too
keep it up |
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fuzzikitten
Annunaki
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Posted : Aug 19, 2004 17:34
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Thanks Moty and Setfan.
I've been working a lot with trying to find a distinct groove, and while not everyone likes it at least they seem to say "it's different" - so I'm pleased for that.
I'm going to try extending the middle section, make it darker, and add some more weird sounds to the whole track.
Thanks again for the feedback!!
-Alex |
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piXan
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Posted : Sep 6, 2004 07:20
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well u have succeded in doing something different!!
i think it is a good song and liked the way u structured it.. i only think the lead sound maybe overused,, but its a funky track!!
cheers
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psypox
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Posted : Sep 6, 2004 18:16
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On 2004-08-19 12:53, PsyGoatDelic wrote:
its sounds nice but dont fit much to psytrance.. with that melody its sounds more like a chilling trance..
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Read he's post again!
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On 2004-08-18 14:26, fuzzikitten wrote:
Lately I've been writing with the attitude of writing 'music' rather than 'psytrance', so it's kind of gone in an unexpected direction. |
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PsyGoatDelic
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Posted : Sep 6, 2004 21:39
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ok... u r right! let me rephrase what i wrote.
i really liked the electric sounds on the intro! the bassline is great! pumping in and out, great work with the bassline!!!
that weird sound sounds like barking synth good hihats... but maybe make it a little louder and add some reverb to it(u know the one u told me...)
the subbass in 1:10 fits really good! u made good breaks and used fx very intelegent! but i think that some sfx really need more bass to be felt more! u know some really vibrating bass to some fx...
the melody fits good to this slow track... very uplifting! it maks me smile when i hearing it now!
over all this is really good happy & uplifting track... different it is! and its reall nice to hear some diverse experimental music! well done man! keep up that great work! and hope to see u soon!
PEACE
p.s. sorry for the last review... i guess i really didnt pay attention to what was written cuz when u told me u posted it i just ran to review it without noticing what u wrote
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fuzzikitten
Annunaki
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Posted : Sep 8, 2004 14:49
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On 2004-09-06 07:20, piXan wrote:
but its a funky track!!
cheers
pixXxan
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*grin*
Thank you all for the feedback!
No need to apologize for feedback PsyGoatDelic - your reaction is your reaction, and I value it no matter if it's positive or negative.
I'm not sure if I'll go back and rework this track (eventually it becomes easier to just write something new) - but your comments help me think about what I will do differently next time, knowing what I did right and what I did wrong.
Thank you!!
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*Karma Cola*
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Posted : Sep 10, 2004 19:41
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Im not a big fan off the beat . IT sounds nice in the first minute, but then it gets a lil draggy for my tastes.
BUt!!!!!!!
I like the sfx in the 3 minute and around the end of the 5th too. I think they the same??
have fun!!
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fuzzikitten
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Posted : Sep 10, 2004 20:33
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On 2004-09-10 19:41, *Karma Cola* wrote:
Im not a big fan off the beat . IT sounds nice in the first minute, but then it gets a lil draggy for my tastes.
BUt!!!!!!!
I like the sfx in the 3 minute and around the end of the 5th too. I think they the same??
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thank you! Yeah, I repeat the effects here and there throughout the song (I get lazy).
thanks for listening!
-Alex
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PsyGoatDelic
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Posted : Sep 11, 2004 21:14
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when i listen to it now it came across my mind... those variating hihats and those pumping basslines really reminds me the start of "palombini power - The Lost Perkulator"
keep this tune man!
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