E-KL!PSE
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Posted : May 7, 2011 02:35:31
I'm kinda stuck on this track. Have a listen & I would love to hear some positive/constructive criticism towards it, all I've really had towards it has been the standard. It's a work in progress & I'm not sure where to take it.
psyraal
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Posted : May 7, 2011 03:07
I've took a listen, 2 basic things i can tell you:
1º. You have 2 options for your intro. Either you make it more and more intense as it builds itself up and you can add tension, distortion here and there, filtering can also help you. Or.. You can cut it, make it smaller, because the way it is now bores a listener (Tooooo Long).
Nothing that can't be fixed
2º. Don't ever limit your tune's bpm so you can fit a percussion loop in it, you used one on your tune all the way to the end. You can do several things here too: Cut, slice, reverse, pitch up/down, slice some more, reverse it again, etc. Or you can use that loop alright, but, with some sort of plugin/effect/automation changing the loops way of sounding, so it doesn't sound the same sound all the way through.
E-KL!PSE
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Posted : May 7, 2011 04:29
Well, that loop. Was just to put there to sort of get a taste of some kind of perc. But I have an idea, of throwing some kind of ethnic perc through the intro. Maybe some kind of crazy filtering is in need for that pad.
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jeeboomba
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Posted : May 7, 2011 04:56
+1 on the intro suggestion.. it will be nice if the listener will know when the deal gonna start..
kik bass and sitting nicely man.. if u on FL, put up that perc loop into fruity slicer and you can make like nice changes for breaks and stuff.. chk it out
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dj chichke
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Posted : May 7, 2011 17:17
i love the vibe of this track.
i think you should raise the volume of the pad at the intro and the volume of the gated pad. the kick and bass sounds very stable. works realy good together but still it has kind of boxy sound, like you made too much processing on it or something. it's not bright enough. but still it's good so don't change it too much. just check how it will sound brighter. i hear kind of white noize all over your intro that masking it. you should get rid of this noize. after the intro you have to put some effetcs or leads, something that will catch the ear of the listener. you have great bassline and groove but psytracne it's much more than that.
you just built the basic and on it you need to bulid your track.
i see potential at this track. keep work on it!
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jonsta
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Posted : May 7, 2011 22:47
Hey man I remember you from Flipside forums I started making trance when I listened to one of your tracks like 2 years ago, before I was only making triphop beats.
About the track:
I don't like the white noise in the background in the intro, it should stop at 20 secs or smth.
Good kick bass combo... when the perc loops comes in I start to feel the groove Good start, but still needs a lot more stuff obviously.
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D_Access
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Posted : May 10, 2011 15:20
Nice groove and bass, i really like it Cheers
aciduss
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Posted : May 10, 2011 23:15
Track is wicked bro! Just make some synths rise up from that beat!
