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HypnoticRobotic - KeepDance
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smoker
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Posted : Mar 12, 2014 10:43:24
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jizy
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Posted : Mar 12, 2014 12:44
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nice feel good tune, variation? i think if u built on it , take time, this could go down on a deep techhouse album quite wel..
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smoker
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Posted : Mar 12, 2014 19:03
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Vorpal-Blade
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 14:13
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Very nice flow .
The sweep at 1 entered too loudly IMO. but the idea is good.
I expected the synths to start up some melody instead of just remaining the same. Even if it's aimed to be a minimal I would still make a bit more of a melody that will develop over time.
Also try to back it up with another sound playing the same thing and changing between them.
Don't know exactly what you're aiming for but I think that would add a lot. |
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 14:44
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I liked it dude. esp the kik and bass.. good job.. the kick.. did u create? it sounds like a bit of flanger flavor .. bass is deep and nice.. flow i like.. i like repeatative music so i thinks this is nice. last part that gun loading like sound.. chk the bass frequency a bit.. cheers..
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smoker
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 16:10
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