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HYPNOTICA ( PSYTRANCE ) 138 BPM
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B-recluse
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Posted : Apr 13, 2015 20:59:34
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B-recluse
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Posted : Apr 13, 2015 21:00
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YEP ! |
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knocz
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Posted : Apr 17, 2015 12:28
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This thing should really really be automatic, it's dead simple to implement, but at the moment it's not possible 
Thanks for this effort! Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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knocz
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Posted : Apr 17, 2015 19:15
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Regarding the tune, The kick is a bit strange to my ears.. maybe a but slow making the pitch, but this is "slow" tempo - I'm really not used to producing this, and it seems to work great 
The leads tend to repeat themselves a lot without much modulations / automation - we can make a repetitive thing very psychedelic just by making it change ever so slightly over time, making everything move forward 
@3:15 - the pass from 4/4 to 3/4 isnt quite seamless, and it can be very heard i nthe high hats - the groove you choose does not seem in sync with the 3/4 tempo... This induces a lot of confusion, and with your "bell like" synth line this is exploited even more I like it, but I would expect (as a listener) this to get "resolved" before 4:36 - so essentially changing the not-synced groove to a synced-grove (one that fits in the 3/4 pattern)
@4:36 Good buildup, but not powerful enough - use drums, stops, build more tension here, so the beat just feels amazing when it finally comes though.
Around 5:12, the bass is almost all present - maybe too much (the listener already will "hear" what is coming, full spectrum ) - one trick is to just cut off all bass subs during this stage (or the the whole buildup), so even if the filter is completely open, the resulting sound is not the "full bass" and when it drops (5:22) it will be so much thicker
The final part of the tune sounds the same, it doesn't bring something new (so the whole tune is coming to this point, building up to it's own "nirvana" or "ecstasy", but the resulting chorus "doesn't resolve" the tune).. this can be difficult to achieve, but it's a good point to think/focus on while composing
Cheers, keep it up!
Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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