Nomad Moon
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Posted : Dec 29, 2010 18:50:46
Hi friends, this is something i'm working on just wanted some opinions/advices as to the general sounds go, the intro is a bit long, still working on it,letting the thoughts flow
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Posted : Dec 29, 2010 20:05
The way it is now I'd like to put it at 148-150 bpm. For me that kick is just begging for a faster speed For slower I'd change the kick sample to something more boomy.
I like the percussion shots!
But the track bores me.. nothing is happening.. nothing is going on.. I suggest you play around with the pitch bend in the intro, take that synth sound and duplicate it, on one take out most of the highs just leaving the bottom part, add some reverb leaking into the highs. On the other duplicate track play around with it (an easy way: put a dblue glitch or two on it ) and take out it's bottom end.
I also suggest you playing a couple of synths over the track. After having this part as you wan't, get a synth or vst you like and know and just play it over the track, while recording (you can record either the midi and/or the audio). Do this with 2-5 synths to create different tracks, so then you just need to mix them together, playing one, then another then take out the first ant put in a 3rd, have the 5th with some fx noises with delay and reverb, etc.
In other words: keep going with it and try to show us something more elaborate, because without this content it's hard to say what's good and whats bad..
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Dec 30, 2010 11:30
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On 2010-12-29 20:05, knocz wrote:
The way it is now I'd like to put it at 148-150 bpm. For me that kick is just begging for a faster speed For slower I'd change the kick sample to something more boomy.
I like the percussion shots!
But the track bores me.. nothing is happening.. nothing is going on.. I suggest you play around with the pitch bend in the intro, take that synth sound and duplicate it, on one take out most of the highs just leaving the bottom part, add some reverb leaking into the highs. On the other duplicate track play around with it (an easy way: put a dblue glitch or two on it ) and take out it's bottom end.
I also suggest you playing a couple of synths over the track. After having this part as you wan't, get a synth or vst you like and know and just play it over the track, while recording (you can record either the midi and/or the audio). Do this with 2-5 synths to create different tracks, so then you just need to mix them together, playing one, then another then take out the first ant put in a 3rd, have the 5th with some fx noises with delay and reverb, etc.
In other words: keep going with it and try to show us something more elaborate, because without this content it's hard to say what's good and whats bad..
First of all thanx for the advices, short and to the point, i really learn alot from u guys,i dont have that much time but i'm going to finish this one , i'm working in stages like some friends on other threads told me, KBASS,PERCS just get it flowing and then i'll add leads and stuff,easy going and having fun
Happy new year!
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Posted : Jan 5, 2011 23:25
Hey Nomad Moon .. How are you friend ? Hope all go's 100 .
For the track .. This one got the best sound i have heard from you ever , Sure need some work here and there but overal i realy liket , True its the beginning of the creation but i can feel your vision .. Imo kik is good but bring some more vol and power to the bass . Bring some live to hh + More loops and changes , Atmospheres and mello pads , Leads and those . Intro .. Must be more here (Let us feel that we are in there ..) open it .. Liket the 2 sound there but fill it more .. With lots of sounds when what is there by now is using for the backround , Creat sounds and levels to bring this real space illusion ..
Cant say much more about by now but sure ill be happy to hear when ready and done .
Cheers .. Yoko .
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 14:32
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On 2011-01-05 23:25, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
Hey Nomad Moon .. How are you friend ? Hope all go's 100 .
For the track .. This one got the best sound i have heard from you ever , Sure need some work here and there but overal i realy liket , True its the beginning of the creation but i can feel your vision .. Imo kik is good but bring some more vol and power to the bass . Bring some live to hh + More loops and changes , Atmospheres and mello pads , Leads and those . Intro .. Must be more here (Let us feel that we are in there ..) open it .. Liket the 2 sound there but fill it more .. With lots of sounds when what is there by now is using for the backround , Creat sounds and levels to bring this real space illusion ..
Cant say much more about by now but sure ill be happy to hear when ready and done .
Cheers .. Yoko .
Good morning!! Thanx for THE WORDS! I'm having a hard time giving the Bass more power without it eating the whole track, how can i do it?Raise the low area or the mid? At this time im not using any sidechain, do u think i should so that it doesn't conflicts with the kick?
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Posted : Jan 10, 2011 12:37
Update!:D Melody Masters Help please!
So at the of the song after the african guy sings his stuff i was thinking of something that could uplift the spirits,a melody of some sort, the track is in E and i think mainly phiregean can anyone give some suggestions?
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Posted : Jan 11, 2011 12:01
And me that am such a nice person
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Posted : Jan 12, 2011 12:07
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Comments as for style and production are very welcome
Top of the morning to u all!!
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Posted : Jan 12, 2011 12:59
loved ur track intro is kinda long u might get it shorter i think u need another break in the middle .. the break with the gated vocal is awesome.. made me trip for a second .. as so the African vocal...
cheers from Iran
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Posted : Jan 12, 2011 13:00
loved ur track intro is kinda long u might get it shorter i think u need another break in the middle .. the break with the gated vocal is awesome.. made me trip for a second .. as so the African vocal...
cheers from Iran
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Posted : Jan 12, 2011 13:13
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On 2011-01-12 13:00, psypersia wrote:
loved ur track intro is kinda long u might get it shorter i think u need another break in the middle .. the break with the gated vocal is awesome.. made me trip for a second .. as so the African vocal...
cheers from Iran
Thanx m8!
i posting it here as i go, just to get the feel of all us psytrance lovers, thanx for the advices,the intro is kinda long and empty, i'l work on it and cut the first section a bit.
I'm still figuring out where to go from here, should have learned music theory
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Posted : Jan 13, 2011 11:17
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On 2011-01-12 13:00, psypersia wrote:
loved ur track intro is kinda long u might get it shorter i think u need another break in the middle .. the break with the gated vocal is awesome.. made me trip for a second .. as so the African vocal...
cheers from Iran
The gated vocal was made with a sample form a cd a friend gave me,then used a very nice plugin called DVS Neon Gate (pretty cool),reverb, delay has send and then draw the the pitch shift on the wave for that strange feeling
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Posted : Jan 13, 2011 12:42
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On 2011-01-13 11:17, Nomad Moon wrote:
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On 2011-01-12 13:00, psypersia wrote:
loved ur track intro is kinda long u might get it shorter i think u need another break in the middle .. the break with the gated vocal is awesome.. made me trip for a second .. as so the African vocal...
cheers from Iran
The gated vocal was made with a sample form a cd a friend gave me,then used a very nice plugin called DVS Neon Gate (pretty cool),reverb, delay has send and then draw the the pitch shift on the wave for that strange feeling
thanks for the tip mate
finish the track so we can hear the complete version
keep up the good work
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Posted : Feb 10, 2011 00:48
Sounds groovy and interesting, vocal is trippy, waiting for complete track.
Good vibes.
Cheerz!!
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Posted : Feb 10, 2011 12:29
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On 2011-02-10 00:48, eLIZAbETHS wrote:
Sounds groovy and interesting, vocal is trippy, waiting for complete track.
Good vibes.
Cheerz!!
Thank u for your kind words, you're new here?
Coming form a new person here at isra it's even more rewarding
For slower I'd change the kick sample to something more boomy.
, i'm working in stages like some friends on other threads told me, KBASS,PERCS just get it flowing and then i'll add leads and stuff,easy going and having fun
.. as so the African vocal...
