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[House] Tamer Amin - Mind Games (Filtered) - Please provide constructive feedback.

Tamer_Amin

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Posted : Jan 27, 2016 09:18:30
Hi guys,

I'm Tamer Amin. I have been following this forum for a while now but this is my first post here. I know I can get some really good guidance so I'm going to cut to the chase. This is not really my first production but the first one I'm willing to show and get some feedback on.

http://www104.zippyshare.com/v/CvX0AnBa/file.html

There are so many areas that I need to improve on, notably:-

1. Adding silent sounds to make tracks less dull.
2. Adding ear-candy variations or background noise, irregular hats, etc.
3. Getting the micro/macro transitions between each section to stop harder (tension/release kind of stuff).

At least these are the points I've realized so far. I would love to hear what everyone thinks and what exactly I should improve on. If it's regarding the points that I have mentioned above, please give me some practical examples I can use to improve in those areas. My goal is to get my composition/production skills to a world-class level so be as cruel as you can be, so i can improve!

Allow me to name some of my greatest inspirations/influences over the years, so you guys have an idea of the direction I want to take my music. (Earlier PRYDA stuff, Guy J, Guy Mantzur, Jeremy Olander, Brian Cid, Cid Inc, Juan Deminicis, Ziger, Khen, Hernan Cattaneo, John Digweed, Sasha, 16 Bit Lolitas, Maceo Plex, Michael Cassette, Oliver Schories, Pedro Aguiar, Petar Dundov, Robert Babicz, Roger Martinez, Seth Troxler, Tigerskin, Tonja Holma, Tom Middleton, Dosem, Eelke Kleijn, James Holden)

Thanks in advance, guys!
vipal
IsraTrance Full Member

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Posted : Jan 27, 2016 19:22
needs more cowbell
not an expert on housemusic but it sounds a bit tame to me.
but.. better ask the guys you mentioned what they think.

          http://soundcloud.com/vipal
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