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Dark-Force
Dark Force

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Posts :  107
Posted : Oct 30, 2006 00:02
Hey dudezzz
well, here is a newer track, part of it at least...sorry for weak breaks but i got tired of it jejejejej ;>

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=DBFDDDDC58599E70

would appriciate very much comments, especially from cardinals hehe
OutpuT


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Posts :  8
Posted : Oct 30, 2006 03:56
nice one there buddy cant wait to hear a completed version of it what kinda platform you produce on btw? check out my new one if you can would like to get a professional opinion its not dark but its pretty intence in my view keep up the good work tho Peace nigga =D
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=891838&t=6522
Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine

Started Topics :  191
Posts :  3097
Posted : Oct 30, 2006 12:35



Hey matan , H are y .. ? . Just download it ..
Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine

Started Topics :  191
Posts :  3097
Posted : Nov 3, 2006 16:34

Hallo ..

Liket that quiet beautiful mello synth there in the backround at the beginning part 00:05 - 00:25 . Didt liket the talking pad in (At the start and again in the other area's of the track , This specific 1 not fit imo to the all build & construction of the whole darkish atmosphere in ther and arounde , Change it to somthing better , Sound abit childish on this super short intro , Try put in ther somthing realy dark , I belive must 'Use' the frighten of the peoples from the first sec' of the whole and with the right touch & mood you will find those fears (They are here on earth and wating for us to pluck them ..) With your talent (As i see) Mind and musical life rhythm you are certainly there . You can touch the sky , And seems by now you are overd that silly proverb 'Sky is the limit' , I think you just cross it (Thats point and line of the usual conceptions of the "modern" society) And you know there is no borders .

Sound abit older then the other 1 you share with us before , More happy . Seems there all was darker / elevation , and here are all more rhythmical , Psychedelic and exaltation . But as i say you know what to put and where and i like this point in your musical tunse and produce , But there is 1 thing i didnt .. There is somthing that i think that redundant & superfluous and even stop abit the runing of the all in it and im sure (At the way i 'Got' and recognize your music & your style by now) That this is not the thing that you are intend and a meant to get , Ther is a kind of lead - Drumish 1 (Abit makes my ears being 'anger' Also cant hear them coming later or with any connection to/for the real meaning and sense for the rest parts or the all combination and your story , so for what ? Just to fill some places ? I dont think is an right thing to do , Didt like it) in 01:00-01:02 And again 01:11- 01-13 Seems unsuitable and fit in there at all (Imo) I think better at this place and time (Dont forget .. Its only the beginning) to work right thought and let the listener (With his logic and mind - Each one with is own differents) get inside your story , So i say (Think) This is not the place for testing (Think is realy stop the speed and the runing and the fun of the all , this is the place to lever , 'Warming' your arsneal weapons , 'Sail and rower' . Herd some great keyboard synth touch - Realy nice .

Most of all i like that super break at 02:24 Coming with an excellent back in , Man at this part 100 But take this talking pad samp' out pls thx ! . Also the Hh at 02:40 Good .

Leave and take the all of the screams out (Imo - no need) .
For the bass - Liket some games in , Can be more hard , He is very stable and determent with the kik and seems is a right choice . But can use some more tools to open it and broaden him , But seems that this demo not your recent new tunes , At this part as i say before the other track was an better 1 , I think they are both realy differents with an many things + Era of time and feeling ) .

Kik - From his base sound good but need imo some more power by maybe battery2 or kontakt2 and maybe some efects . But overal cool .

Some and clean Hh around , Imo need some more games and being projecting and protruding , They can also help with the leading of the all teck let them be heard abit more but at the same time take an good care that they will not get wild with the other highly tunes , You can do that But sure they are in the right place .

Sure its not my real style but as i hear and see the things this is the most project that i can tell wow .. 'I like full on' (But at the same time i say it very carefuly and all because of an good dark movement in , Not much hardish as i wish - Like more the hardcore dark (Exenomorph style) but certainly this is a room , Unique and the aspecial style of yours giving that deepness feeling .

Hope hearning some more soon . Good luck then mate . Great weekend ..
Dark-Force
Dark Force

Started Topics :  14
Posts :  107
Posted : Nov 4, 2006 00:26
Wow Yoko...taking review very serious, and it's very nice :>>
i glad of all the good things u said, and actually dont agree with almost anything bad you said about it, but again, thats diffrence of styles and opiniouns..
actually i almost dont connect to any real "Dark" artist these days, escpecially not hardcore ...never had,im not trying to create anything semilar to anyone either...it's just my stuff u know, you can take it or leave it
real thanks for the time you took for it, hope to hear some of your stuff also soon (and i promis to take the time and review ;>)
*Bom*

D.Goblin
Distorted Goblin

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Posts :  242
Posted : Nov 4, 2006 23:06
hey bro, nice track u have there, good driving and some twisted synths too

always try to make fresh sounds

see ya
K!ller Inst!ncT


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Posts :  52
Posted : Nov 14, 2006 02:25
can you upload one more time?
thx!           http://www.weirdandfreak.up.pl
Design Studio.
http://www.darklife-records.info
Dark Life Records
Dark-Force
Dark Force

Started Topics :  14
Posts :  107
Posted : Nov 14, 2006 17:59
sure bro
dont know why so long this
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=E54398182AE60DC2
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