kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : May 23, 2010 15:40:37
ok so this is my first song ever.......its called Hooligan.........it was made on Fl Studio 9 with all the regular plug-ins that come with it ...no add. vsts were used...it sint offically finished yet or mastered properly......pllease tell me what u think
Disciple
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Posted : May 28, 2010 00:54
nice 1st try, issues I think are too slow (try 135bpm at least), bass and kick clash. no main hook, progression too slow and lacking groove. try adding some more percussion and a chord progression.
kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : May 30, 2010 13:34
ok so heres the newer version fixed up a little bit more melodic cuz i was listening to deadmaus5 the whole night last night and astrix so tell me what you think
Disciple
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Posted : May 30, 2010 20:23
getting there mate, defiantly an improvement but feel it needs more high hats and a atmospheric background.
Midnight Sun
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Posted : May 30, 2010 22:12
wizanda
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Posted : May 31, 2010 14:51
Like how this track is written in half tempo, yet still sounds fast. The vocals also need to be balanced with reverb and delay to match the track. www.wizanda.comwww.soundcloud.com/wizanda
