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HiOnPsy
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 25, 2007 21:03
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check it out.....
http://www.yousendit.com/download/TEhVYlJSZ1BGOFEwTVE9PQ
the track is not masterd...i just started makin music lets see wat u guys think and maybe ill think abt makin more music hehe kiddin .....i can never stop its tooo freakin killer....but a few pointers wld be appreciated 4 sho...feel free to say wats on ure mind....let those thoughts flow |
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Cosmic Tandav
Trailoka
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Posted : Apr 26, 2007 08:26
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ok ..here goes..
it starts out well with good atmospheres,but the lyrics are a lil too disturbing for me ,and a lil too fast ,maybe 155 ??..but i suggest work a lil more before the first kick starts.its followed by pretty decnt fx,and i feel that the track slows down or breks down too early at around 1;30 ,just as you get the flow and feel of the track..good effects at 02;10,but the bass line is very low cant actually hear it...more good effects ,and atmospherics around 03 ;10,but again the atmospheres just suddenly stops..and when it picks up again the bass is too low....at around 05;10 good start with good groove to the bass ,and good synth work and more efx keeps the track goin till the end ..but again a sudden stop ..and i dint like the samples in the end ,i feel tht was not a good way to end the track...
but all in all pretty decent work for somone who just started ..keep workin on the flow of the track,add more percussion ,keep the atmospheres goin on in the back and cut out the voice samples..i feel theres too much samples..i feel like watchin a movie a the music just comes and goess...
Good Luck ..im sure u ll do well...
BOOM!!!
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Meta-Morphosis
IsraTrance Senior Member
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Posted : Apr 26, 2007 08:49
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hahahahaha EVERYONE WANTS TO BE A PRODUCER
  “What we need is the development of the Inner Spiritual man, the unique individual, whose treasure is hidden in the symbols of our mythological tradition and in man’s unconscious psych.” - CJ Jung |
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