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hm no feedback on the last one.. well lets try again :D Psytrance 143bpm
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chabo
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Posted : Aug 21, 2012 21:52:44
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Gedankenexperiment
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Posted : Aug 23, 2012 00:15
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this is pretty hypnotic i think:) in some parts maybe a little more action would be great, but i'd say all in all you did a good job:) the production sounds pretty professionell to me.
peace:)
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aciduss
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Posted : Aug 23, 2012 00:49
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Track is very simple mate. Not bad but too simple.
You could use much more elements: synths, fx, percussion, voice samples try to fill more that space or make delicate details to entertain the mind.
Thanks for sharing. |
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psyviz
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Posted : Aug 23, 2012 02:31
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Definatly a sweet track i like it although the ending i feel is to slow or long at changing for a ending not bad though i feel a good groove  and i would suggest more fx that emphasize more change and a few cool Atmospheres,
dont give up keep...
Kind regards ant
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Melange5738
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Posted : Aug 23, 2012 05:05
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It needs at least one more dimension to it. Also, the bass line on the bridge section around 5:00 does not seem to work for me, it is too inorganic. |
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decibel
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Posted : Aug 23, 2012 12:45
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I was able to listen on the laptop no worries - mobile not so much... track is really cool - the melody hook you have if awesome and up to the 2 min mark it really had all my attention but I concur that it needs some more substance, the elements you have all blend nice and there's a cool, eerie morning, dust kicking up type vibe but I want more.. some rises and impacts or some really high pass melodies sweeping in and out that are still a little dissonant.
The white noise snare I would replace to with a more impact type snare or if you like that electronic sound try a 909 type one with some reverb. Thanks for the track and keep em coming..
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chabo
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Posted : Aug 23, 2012 13:42
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Well, thanks a lot for all the feedback  And I hear you although I´m a sucker for simplicity.. but for sure I will defiantly keep on working after these good words |
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psyviz
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Posted : Sep 10, 2012 18:57
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Keep the comments as a reference for future productions keep smiling
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