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Hipnoticus Monotunos Interminabilis
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Flubber
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Posted : Aug 15, 2014 15:31:23
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Bipolar
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Posted : Aug 18, 2014 00:32
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Overall nice track! I would probably try to fill in more the intro, maybe some trippy voices, or more sounds to fill in that minute and a half, the bass I think it has a little frequency jumping there maybe around 120 o 250 some where in that range, and I think that's the reason why the bass kind of eats the entire mix! the mix its a bit flat! ( maybe you are working with headphones, that could explain it) or maybe try to pull your sounds a little up, to give more life to the mix, minute 3.47 is really interesting, try playing with random leads fx, that could really help you trip out that part! but its really nice, the sound is good, maybe a few more breaks can help the flow! a bit more changes in the composition, adding maybe some more random noises could help the composition, 5.26 needs a break, but really nice song man, it has a direction, its really psychedelic! good job!  |
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Flubber
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Posted : Aug 18, 2014 03:41
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thank you . |
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Aug 20, 2014 09:21
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Hey man.
I agree with bipolar. You could build more on the intro, making it progress smother into the tune.
Kick seems abit thin on my phones.
I would add some crashes or something to mark when something new happends, a rise or so would be nice too, to get the progression more clear.
3.36 its a cool atmo.
Some more reverb on that synth would be nice.
Few more sounds in between could work.
Cause now around 4.30 you starting to loose me.
Its a good start, but it seems a bit empty.
Build bit more on it and i think you could get something really nice out of it
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Flubber
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Posted : Aug 21, 2014 19:38
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thank you so much for your atention tips and kind words.
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