hey guys my 2nd track is almost done ,tell me what you think about it.
cheers
Redshift
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 1, 2011 18:00
This is way to fractured, no groove to dance to, imho. And the mix needs a lot of work - the kick and the bass are way too high in the mix. It sounds like you mixed this with small computer speakers.
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Andre
hikuri
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Posted : Oct 21, 2011 01:58
it needs a lot of work i know but i must have messed out big time in the mastering stage ,ill try to improve it thanks for the reply cheers
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Oct 21, 2011 07:05
Hey there Hikuri ..
Interesting but very boring , No real movement (As Andre allready have said) , Theres allso nice area's as 01:42 . You have an good ideas . Bass kik combo is cool but you should work on others to bring them be more live and here , More Hh loops variation/Game's changes + Bring them be more clear , Clean and bright (You have the vision inside - I can feel and hear .. Dont be lazy , Try express it here) . I miss surprise's in your music , Story , Somthing to run with/Who take me in .
Track sound now more as an test of tools .. Fill it up with more crazy thing's and good energy (Create 'Warm' and harmony) , Work on the global sound and the right mix .
,ill try to improve it thanks for the reply cheers 