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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 20:09
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hi for all
i'm Moriel Cohen from Israel , kiryat mozkin.
my age 17 years old and i make music (tance)
so i want to show u my track its not finish yet but i want get a response for my track
i sing in the track . . .
so the link
http://www.mytempdir.com/474565
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Posted : Feb 26, 2006 04:20
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check out the new tracks forum youll probably get more replies there.
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Posted : Feb 26, 2006 04:25
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youre production is great so far did you have someone teach you about music or all self taught? I think the main melody is good but it is in the song a bit to much with no variation well this track isnt quite my style but it is good just be strategic with the vocals and the melody to avoid cheese id really like to hear where it goes from here
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Posted : Feb 26, 2006 06:46
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thnx .... |
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Posted : Feb 26, 2006 18:23
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if u can give me mor reply |
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 01:47
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well,German quality here 
I bet u are German,arent u?
I didnt like ur kick,u choosed it to make it hearble into the mix (cause of the low bass) but its a bit of oldschool with no impact.
Uhh something more,the basic melody lead isnt it a little bit high?
I would play it one or two octaves lower,it will give much more power.
Cool melody,cool vocal take.
I like the vocal,its full of revrb (maybe too much) but it works cool with the voice.
It gives a cold feelling that fits with the rest.
Nice style, i hope to give us more
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 08:23
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thanx bro...
and i from israel not german .....
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 08:36
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the lyrics of my track 
i'm going to chase
after her
i can not to be a loser again (bad english )
i'm drunk from u i'm love in u
Iris i have a gift for u
i smoke uf marijuana boof
im on the roof ani roze lauf
(this is word in hebrew .. in english its like i want to fly)
if u love me and i lov u tell me what i need to do |
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