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stolen
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 20:04
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hi for all
i'm Moriel Cohen from Israel , kiryat mozkin.
my age 17 years old and i make music (tance)
so i want to show u my track its not finish yet but i want get a response for my track
i sing in the track . . .
so the link
http://www.mytempdir.com/474565
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Krell
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 21:07
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Hi Stolen
Sounds like Infected Mushroom to me.
I would get rid of the vocals and focus more on the music itself - try to make it sound different from all the others stuff being released.
If I am to like it
1 : Stop the singing
2 : Make it a bit more psychedelic (weird noises)
3 : Work more on the melodies / riffs to make it sound different from all the other stuff being produced.
Hope you can use the feedback.
Best Wishes
Krell
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diskOtek
Entek
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 01:55
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hello stolen!
your track is good-u ve got nice production!
but i have to agree,its all infected mushroom influenced....
...vocals,snare rollls,leads..
if you like that style,try keeping a base and then expand in your own way cause it sounds alot IM!
anyway,its a quite good track!
good luck!
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 04:09
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I am trying to find an IM like element into the track and i see some points but :
As i know IM are from israel,the man is from North Europe for sure.
As a compiment its cool but:
1st .
His leads reminds me ElectroBodyMusic Leads
with many 4+,7+ notes distances
2nd.
If somebody puts vocals in his tune suddenly becomes IM?And y not astrix or somebody else?
If its so easy i d like to be Erez 
His singing its serius and cold.
It reminds me EBM,electro or even industrial singers.
3rd.
The fx with the verb and fx he is using its common in trance and other electronic genres production.
4rth.Snare rolls? Come on man!
99% of trance or Eurobeat producers uses snare rolls.
Kick stretch?Also too common
I find it as a very cool hybrid trance with his personal style that i liked much.
Check the bassline when goes full cause its getting dirty 
I would suggest also continue singing,(cool lyrix btw)
Friendly regards
HTTP://www.decadancerecords.it/audioplug |
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piko_bianko
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 07:18
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stolen
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 08:19
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hhhh
thnx for all and i make music what i like this is my style if its like IM so i very proud from me....  |
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stolen
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 08:37
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the lyrics of my track
i'm going to chase
after her
i can not to be a loser again (bad english )
i'm drunk from u i'm love in u
Iris i have a gift for u
i smoke uf marijuana boof
im on the roof ani roze lauf
(this is word in hebrew .. in english its like i want to fly)
if u love me and i lov u tell me what i need to do
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CLAW
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Posted : Feb 27, 2006 14:18
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hi there,
i think that if this guy makes something similar to other artist that would be, void.
anyways, I will not judge if it is similar to IM, or void or anybody else,
I will just say that u have good skills in producing, nice ideas, clean and sharp production & u r very young
Use all the above, and try to make something unique, with your own signiture...
all the best
• Noize Conspiracy Records •
http://soundcloud.com/c-l-a-w
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 28, 2006 01:16
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I liked it....
good luck, if you will continue with it, you have a future!
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pavaka
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Posted : Mar 5, 2006 03:14
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On 2006-02-27 08:37, stolen wrote:
the lyrics of my track
i'm going to chase
after her
i can not to be a loser again (bad english )
i'm drunk from u i'm love in u
Iris i have a gift for u
i smoke uf marijuana boof
im on the roof ani roze lauf
(this is word in hebrew .. in english its like i want to fly)
if u love me and i lov u tell me what i need to do
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u stole my heart !
nice work man.. at this age.. wow! u got the skills.. keep it up.. u gonna go a long way.. and all the best
peace
www.soundcloud.com/pavaka
www.myspace.com/pavakadeej
www.myspace.com/shroomhunters |
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