Hi , this first chill track who I made , check it out ;)
Argonauticus
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Posted : Mar 23, 2012 20:29:46
Hi, this is first track in chill who I made ,intresting waht do you think ,your critcs and feedbacks are welcome
Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Mar 25, 2012 23:46
In my opinion the bass and kick combo is too 'heavy' on this nice chill track.
I think you need more melodies into the story of this tune, or make it much shorter than its over 8 minutes. The beat & rhythm stays almost the same from about 3:20 and to the end of the tune. It doesn't add to the development of your tune and makes it quite static.
Argonauticus
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Posted : Mar 27, 2012 23:21
Thnks for your opinion and advices this track needs some work and , yeah I need to work with melodies and rytm , now work be in progres , update coming soon
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Posted : Mar 28, 2012 12:21
