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hi mates !!!!!! aadvice please !!! :)
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mikechedelic
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Posted : Jun 14, 2011 16:27:18
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Sunrise Travellers
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Posted : Jun 14, 2011 23:53
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Well...i like the sample that i heard...but the track need work...especially on percussions part, generally i found it little "empty"...
some advices: (i'm not specialist or something, i just say my opinion)
# work more on percussion part
# put some nice fm leads
# play with some fx
# try also the dblue glitch (you can make great stuff with this fx)
i like the bass & kick (nice collaboration)...and fx sound that you have (0.28 - 0.40)...
waiting for the complete track mate...
keep it up...
cheers///
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psyraal
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Posted : Jun 14, 2011 23:56
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Is this darkpsy? Well from what i heard it is i think.
Also the dude in the previous post is right about the percussion stuff, more variation delivers more energy and gets attention of the listener. Something driving your track is missing, i dunno, maybe a morphing lead, pad, something.
Keep it up.
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Obelizk
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Posted : Jun 15, 2011 03:40
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no clap/snare. the hi hats are high passed quite a bit it seems. You can lower the frequency you're cutting the lows at, and try to use some different hi hats to mix up the rhythm, so it doesn't sound completely triggered by a sampler. I used to do that - use 1 hat sample and repeat it, but it makes it sound cheaper in my opinion. It can work in some songs. Also the breaks in the hihats playing causes the momentum to slow down.
Some of the synths also sound like they're too highpassed. Song needs more meat.  I would work with some more pitched/scaled sounds as well, and throw some glitchiness on them. You could do a lot with what you started with here.
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mikechedelic
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Posted : Jun 15, 2011 06:33
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guys tnks alotTtttttttttttttttt for the advice !!!!
any of u have like any samples banks with
hihats and snares !!!!? try to find, but it is really hard !!!!
tnks mates!!!!!!!!!!!!!
+vibes!!!
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Obelizk
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Posted : Jun 15, 2011 07:53
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Sunrise Travellers
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Posted : Jun 15, 2011 15:38
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On 2011-06-15 06:33, mikechedelic wrote:
guys tnks alotTtttttttttttttttt for the advice !!!!
any of u have like any samples banks with
hihats and snares !!!!? try to find, but it is really hard !!!!
tnks mates!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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search the forum you can find very good stuff generally...
http://forum.isratrance.com/lots-of-psytrance-production-links/
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