Hi , have slowly and sadness track here, check it out :)
Argonauticus
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 00:22:10
Hi Slowly and little bit sadness track have here .Your feedback are welcome, thks for listening.
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 11:32
Nice track, really enjoyed listening to it
Maybe few little brakes from 4-6 min will be good,to give that part a little power
Argonauticus
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 12:37
Thks Xsze for your feedback and opinion
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 14:31
great , very good ambiance, very psychedelic, loved it
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 16:11
Thnk you Nomad Moon , Im satisfied that you like it
makus
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 16:57
well basically that's ok.
now to the parts that i didn't like.
check the clap and the bell melody that kicks in around 2:18. these elements should be in the center.
now to the more difficult stuff. u created the main parts and the breaks, but u forgot to create nice transitions between them.
also, please, could u forget about the copy and paste functionality? make ur melodies more diverse. arpegiator was nice when it was invited but now we need something more live.
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Posted : Mar 8, 2012 20:14
Thks Makus for your feedback and your advice . I dont copy paste something , yeah this melody I heard before too , I dispersed accidentaly this melody, when I did some arp , and I want know who are real creator of this melow, because I was looking some stuff in internet and I dont find nothing :| ( but this melody reminds me soundtrack from some movie) if enyone knows let me know abaout that . Thks
Slowly and little bit sadness track have here .Your feedback are welcome, thks for listening. 
, very good ambiance, very psychedelic, loved it 
make ur melodies more diverse. arpegiator was nice when it was invited but now we need something more live.
