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Hi ! have here ambient or downtepo track any way something like that check it out ;)
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Argonauticus
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Posted : Apr 7, 2013 13:01:03
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supergroover
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Posted : Apr 7, 2013 15:17
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Hi there!
Lot's of ideas in one track.. Actually so many that it feels cramped! So I'd recommend not to put so many sounds in a track, especially not in the beginning.
Give the indian lady some more reverb and lower the volume a little.
Overall it sounds pretty good. Not sure if I really like the groove of the track though. Maybe try to make the beats a bit funkier.
Might sound like a lot of critique.. but you have some nice ideas going on here. Just needs a bit of a better flow and some more structure.
Good luck!
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Argonauticus
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Posted : Apr 10, 2013 03:50
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Hi ! thank for tips i expect, this helps me in work.  |
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nebula nova
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Posted : Apr 10, 2013 18:35
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nice one.. love those "snipping drum noises.."
but really gets a bit much when the male voice comes in.. and could some..what do you call it.. dropping out parts in the middle.. |
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metamorphosis music
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Posted : Apr 10, 2013 22:36
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LOVE this1, beautfiul n inspirational, followed  |
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Argonauticus
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Posted : Apr 12, 2013 20:09
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Hi! Glad to hear that you enjoyed , male voice is me with my memories from beautiful summer morning with little bit of nostalgi xD |
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fraxi
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Posted : Apr 14, 2013 09:01
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this is great |
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